Apr 28, 2011

Haiku - A Real Blast



















Stunning are your words,
Sweeten this life's bitterness,
So speechless, I am!



No one fits your shoes,
Its uniqueness solely yours,
Striking timelessly.




Fond thought,
Balqis
April 28th 2011
A sizzling Thursday evening.


Image :  linebaybahamas.com

18 comments:

  1. stunning words may hurt a heart in so many ways that we can ever imagine. Most of the time they conceal the truth for words are just spoken not done.

    hehe

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  2. It maybe, it may be not. Depends on what situation but by right, that's your say. Thanks a lot for being an early bird! Be here again! :)

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  3. I admire your writing so much. I can't do it.
    Yesterday I came but I felt shy to comment at the post below.
    :)
    I'm glad you accepted it.

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  4. I preferred the second writing.. Both are greatly penned but I am feel more connected and relate to the second.. Say, sis, you pen out my thoughts.. :)

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  5. @Ana - Thank you! It's a boost for me to write more. :)

    Oh, you don't have to feel shy to comment. Just write it. It's a pleasure indeed being awarded by you. Thanks again. :)

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  6. @Krislin - Thanks a lot. I wrote what's on my mind. :)

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  7. wow..., it's you make good poem, Haiku - A Real Blast. What is the haiku that name somewhere? like the beach? fun blogs. greetings.

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  8. @Moon - C'mon, speak up! LOL
    Thank you for being here. :)

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  9. @mempawah - Thank you so much. I don't know the haiku that name somewhere or some places. :)

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  10. Thanks a lot, Geeta. It's always nice to get good words from friends. :)

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  11. Life-sweetening words
    Gratitude of yours so high
    Soft-hearted you are!

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  12. Suresh, what a beautiful reply! Thanks a lot. :)

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  13. "No one fits your shoes,
    Its uniqueness solely yours"

    I really love them lines :D

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