Jan 24, 2012

Wishes




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Wishes
Bursting inside
Jolting from end to end
Strong like the North Wind blowing South
*A w e s o m e*
Like   butterflies   spreading  their  wings
Colourful of a kind
Grasp reality
Smiling
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Balqis
Jan24’12


** I'm inspired by Princesa Fiona's Butterfly Cinquain at 
Many thanks to Princesa Fiona for introducing other forms of poetry writing.
Her poems are really awesome!**

40 comments:

  1. This is so wonderful Balqis!:) And it describes me and my wishes that keep on bursting inside of me, like a butterfly that trying to fly just to have my dream..:))hehehe..:) I love this!! *blink blink* :) *spreading my wings* and ready to fly now..:)) Muaahh!! :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Ros. Glad to know you could relate to it. I was trying my best in writing this Butterfly Cinquain making sure it looks like a butterfly. Imagine, I spent much time to make it looks like one. :) I even delayed my lunch because of it! LOL

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  2. So beautifully described by you about the wishes that spread their wings like butterflies and burst inside jolting from end to end. Our wishes are truly colorful and go beyond our imagination sometimes.

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    1. Hi Elvirah! Welcome to my blog! Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. I really appreciate it.

      We have so many wishes, some might come true some might not. However, it's ok to wish.

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  3. another 'beautiful' from me to you. this is sooo beautiful, the words, the essence and the way you wrote it.

    maybe one day you can book your collections..u got the potential. hihi :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Inspector. I'm beyond words to describe how much it means getting such a kind and nice words from you. :)

      May be, yes, who knows may be, one day I'll book my works provided there are potential buyers/readers like YOU! Hehehe

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    2. oh sure thing :D

      ps : i have problem to post comment here. the box seems not appear. i have to reload few times before i could eventually see it. just to let you know :)

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    3. It scares me to hear that. I'm afraid you guys might face so much problems in commenting. Please, do inform me if it doesn't work well. Thank you, Inspector. :)

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    1. Oh Dana! Your comment means so much to me. Thank you! :)

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  5. I am totally awestruck with the way you bring out the sincerest of emotions in verses. Penning down Cinquain is most definitely a difficult task. But you have done it beautifully, Balqis. W*E*L*L D*O*N*E

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    1. Sui, I'm blushing getting the W*E*L*L D*O*N*E from you. It means a lot to me. Thank you right from the bottom of my heart. I'm trying my best to come up with a butterfly Cinquain. A difficult task indeed but I don't want to be defeated before I try. :) No pain, no gain. ;) Princess Fiona is always doing good deeds to everyone of us. I salute her.

      Thanks again, Sui. I need people like you around. :)

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  6. I love the flow, it is very creative as well the image fits well...

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    1. Thank you so much, Will. I'll always remember your nice comments. Appreciate it. :)

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  7. wow sis Balqis..you have said it beautifully and I have always loved butterflies.."wishes bursting inside"..yeah I feel my wishes bursting and may our wishes come true..I love the color Balqis..Princess ate Fiona will love it.. hihihi ;)..

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    1. Thank you so much, Sie. Nice to see you again. Let's pray may our wishes come true. :)

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  8. Wonderful Cinquain! I loved it!
    Keep Smiling :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Hisila. *Smiles*

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  9. Oh, I couldn't have said that better myself, your description says it all. Nice.

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    1. Thank you so much, Miss Lego. You're very supportive. :)

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  10. You did a *wonderful* job, dear Balqis!! The colours of the entire post are SO pretty! I like how you linked the "wishes bursting inside" to the "butterflies spreading their wings". Truly *AWESOME* just like your 5th line! *he he* Thank you for participating and for all of those lovely compliments you gave me here *blush*! :-)

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    1. Thank you so much, Princess. You always shower me with so many nice words. I can never thank you enough. Sometimes, I like to challenge myself. That keeps me sane!

      You're my inspiration for this Butterfly Cirquain. I'm happy to have known you. :))

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    1. Look who is here! At last, after a long silence I hear and "Aw**!". I'm so happy to see you again, Omo. I hope you're doing fine.

      You know what? Seems like a coincidence, I was thinking how tied-up you're with work when there came an "Aw**!" from you. Telepathy!! Hehehe

      Thanks for making a presence. :))

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  12. first.. i love the picture.. it's so magical..

    next, i love how you compared wishes to butterflies.. what a nice comparison :)

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    1. Aj, it means so much hearing that from you. Thank you so much for everything. Keep coming! :)

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  13. I'm having troubles commenting at yours and Maznah's blog.
    Sometimes it works and the next day it doesn't.
    I love butterflies!

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    1. Sorry to hear that, Ana. May be the new threaded comment causes it. I'm just guessing. Hopefully, it'll be ok soon.

      I appreciate your visit. Thanks, Ana. :)

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  14. Hi, so beautifully written, Balqis. You are great.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sam. You're also great with all the beautiful poems in your blog. :)

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  15. Fabulous Balqis! I love the image you used, the comparison between wishes and butterflies is perfect and sweet.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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    1. Thank you, Cindy! Nice to see you again. :)

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  17. Hello Balqis.
    The imagery & feeling of this is beautiful.
    I admire your creativity.
    Keep up the good work, my friend.
    Thank you for sharing.

    Thank you too for your continuing loyalty & support of my blog. It is because of readers like yourself who stop by often & leave kind comments that encourages me to keep on writing & sharing my expressions from the heart. I hope our friendship will be a long-lasting one (smile).

    Have a wonderful weekend Balqis!
    Don't forget to stop by & collect your special gift in honor of my 1st Blogoversary.

    Special Celebration (Part.2):It's My Blogoversary!

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    1. Hello Andy! Thank you so much for your kindness. It really means a lot and getting the kind words from you makes me feel so honoured!

      I always return to your blog because there's a great attraction there. Your poems are superb!

      I've checked out your Blogosversary's post and I'd like to say lots of thanks for your recognition.

      You have a wonderful weekend, too! :)

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