Feb 16, 2015

Spark


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walking together
in the ebb of time, we pause
strengthening loose ends



© 2015 Balqis


My participation at Haiku Horizons prompt "Spark".

26 comments:

  1. Couldn't agree more! Sparking Haiku, BB- :))

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    1. Thank you so much, Omo. I'm honoured! :))

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    1. Your wow means a lot. Thank you so much! :)

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  3. How beautiful lines, wonderful Balqis :)

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  4. Given the bonding there is already it is not going to be difficult! Wonderful lines Balqis!

    Hank

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  5. I like your use of the word "eb" and the thought to strengthen loose ends. Lovely thoughts,

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    1. I'm humbled by your nice comments. Thank you so much, Maggie. :)

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  7. Happy Day.

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  8. This haiku tells me that I need to retrospect. Maybe it's because of the tone it carries. It's still a lovely read! :)

    The blogspot comment section just won't work on Chrome. I had to shift to Internet Explorer to comment (after several failed attempts on Chrome). :(
    I have added Disqus comment form on my blog. I so missed interacting with blog readers.

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    1. Thanks, Parmita, for commenting. :)

      That's the spirit - never give up! :)

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  9. And that brings back the spark alive :-)

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  10. It's what people need to do Balqis. Love the way you penned it. I admire your haikus!

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