Jan 31, 2015

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when leaves start to fall
and you hide among the wind
it isn't fair play


© 2015 Balqis


Sharing this Haiku at Haiku Horizons.

28 comments:

  1. Love the poem, Balqis!
    Such deep feelings!!

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    1. Thanks, Epsita! As usual, I was just penning my thoughts. :)

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  2. Oops! You hang it there, BB- :))

    Very nice catch-

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    1. Oh, sure! Thanks for your concern. :))
      Actually, it's just another small piece of my thoughts, Omo.
      Been thinking what are the lines to fit that prompt.
      Anyway, thanks to you, as always! :)

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  3. Yes , that is not the fair play , very nice Balqis :)

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    1. Much thanks, Aunt Mary. You make me want to write more! :)

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    1. So kind of you, Ire. Thank you so much! :)

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    1. Thank you so much. It means a lot, Jazzy. :)

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  6. Fair play or not... it made me smile, so it's better than fair :)

    My take on the prompt - Perfection plays...

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  7. lovely.

    about the award, you can wait until you are notified by Thursday poets rally,

    i am only nominating you, about two weeks later, someone may ask you to take it, from a poetry blog.

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    1. Once again, thank you, Iremonger, for the nomination and explanation. It's so kind of you. :)

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  8. 'Lempar Batu Sembunyi Tangan'? I think that is the similar meaning? Love the poetic way you convey it. :) It's beautiful Balqis.

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    1. It's more or less! :)

      Thank you so much, Christine. :)

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  9. Just love your Haikus Balqis. I wonder how you manage to create such beautiful scenes with few words.
    Keep writing and enchanting us.
    Marie - https://mahshimarshmallow.wordpress.com/

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    1. Thank you so much, Marie. It's always nice hearing encouraging words from you. :)

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  10. I loved the personification of entities here .... beautiful :-)

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    1. Thank you so much, Amrit. I'm so honoured and especially when this comment comes from a person who knows so much literary works. Thanks! :)

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  11. Came from Marie's blog....Loved your haiku.. so beautiful.

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    1. I appreciate so much your first visit, Amira. Thank you for checking out my blog and your nice comments. You're always welcome here. :)

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