Jan 5, 2015

Haiku


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my wishes granted
when I see the moon and stars
dancing in my dream


© 2015 Balqis

10 comments:

  1. Wow! That's really a beautiful dream, you are lucky to have your moon and stars in your dream , nice poetry :)

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    1. So nice of you, Aunt Mary. Glad to see you again! Thank you so much. :)

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    1. Your comment much appreciated, Omo. Thank you so much! :)

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  3. Salam, suka sgt dgn penulisan awak :) lama jugak tggu awk tulis lagi pusi2 pendek cmni..hehe dan selalunya mmg xmengecewakan :D hihi

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    1. Waalaikumsalam Lynnda. Terima kasih kerana bertandang ke sini.

      Kadang-kadang suka jugak nak tulis puisi panjang tapi kebuntuan idea, jadi saya cubalah tulis Haiku yang hanya terdiri daripada 3 baris ayat. Terima kasih kerana membacanya. :)

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    1. Indeed it is! Thank you, Amrit. :)

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  5. These lines definitely make us realize that; our dreams can meet reality some day- just like the moon and the stars!! Lovely

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    1. Anything is possible. The sky is the limit. :)
      Thanks for your inspiring words, Epsita. :)

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