Mar 25, 2014

Memories


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memories linger
this sandy beach held
our footsteps once


Written for Haiku Horizons prompt "sand".


© 2014 Balqis

40 comments:

  1. And then the sea came upon that sand and washed over our past prints but thankfully we can retain those lovely days within our memories.

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    1. Indeed, you're right! Thank you so much for your beautiful response, Rumpunch. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Rallentanda. :)

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    1. Appreciate your words. Thanks, Reading Pleasure. :)

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  4. so touched by its sadness...beautiful

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    1. Glad you could feel it. Much thanks, Sumana. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Milan. I'm glad you like it. :)

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    1. Appreciate your kind words. Thanks! :)

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  7. Maybe this footsteps stay there forever, hidden to the eyes, but silent witnesses of gone by times.

    You are a perfect haiku maker, BB!

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    1. What's sweet is hard to erase. Yup, who knows the footsteps remain no matter how many times tide washes over it. It can still be felt and seen by the heart.

      Thank you so much for your compliment, Od. :)

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  8. This is very emotional Balqis, absolutely lovely.

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    1. Thank you so much, Cheryl. I'm so glad you could feel the emotion. :)

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  9. Tinged with yearning...Beautifully done Balqis.

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  10. Nostalgic sand holds footsteps of memories!

    Your haiku bootstrapping into Mind place- ;))

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    1. Its so sweet of you, Omo. I hope it can stay on much longer in the mind space! Much appreciated your kind words. :)

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  11. Many memories can be found on the sand of many beaches around the world. Nice words Balqis. Nice images too.
    Stay well always .

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    1. Thank you so much, Marie.
      Be happy! :)

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    1. ..but remain in loving memory.
      Thanks, MMT. :)

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  13. Nice to revisit places that hold memories. More so when it involves two beings with feelings for each other. Wonderful write Balqis!

    Hank

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    1. Aww..glad you could feel it. Thanks, Jyotsna. ::)

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  15. You never fail to amaze me. :)

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  16. Haiku Horizons? It sounds like Haiku Heights. Wow!!! I'll join this blog. Missed my haiku friends!

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    1. Yup, you better check it out. See you there!
      Looking forward to reading your Haiku. :)

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    1. Thanks, Alice. Your words mean a lot. :)

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  18. hey balqis, coming to check your blog, beautiful haiku :)

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    1. Hi Dana! Welcome back! It's so nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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