Mar 31, 2014

Trip


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defying moment
of darkness to rays of hope
a sole trip for good


Written for Haiku Horizons prompt "Trip".


© 2014 Balqis

24 comments:

  1. Hope, a force of strength that can move mountains. Wonderful write Balqis!

    Hank

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  2. a classic one ! feel your energy ,Balqis !

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    1. Thanks, Raj, for your kind words. :)

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  3. If there are connections between darkness and light, it would be the soft ray of hope!

    Beautiful haiku, BB

    This show why balqis is your name!!

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    1. The soft ray is the saviour from losing hope. Thank you so much, Od, for your understanding of this simple Haiku and for your acknowledgement. It's always a pleasure reading you. :)

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    1. I appreciate your comment, Amrit. Thank you so much. :)

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  5. awww...love this spiritual take, Balqis! Beautiful....

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  6. Beautiful contrast. Hope makes moments of life shine through darkness. Stay well Balqis

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    1. I'm inspired by your words. Thank you so much, Marie. :)

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  7. Always a glimmer of light at the end of the dark tunnel. Without hope life has no meaning.

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    1. Hope makes life go on. Thank you so much, Rallentanda. :)

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  8. Ah- finding hope sometimes can be so hard but once it's there, darkness eaten by light! And the soul purify- :))

    Inspiring, BB!

    I've one haiku I'm neglecting since a long, which is about hope and pain. May be I should put it anyway- :/

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    1. Wow! Loved what you said, Omo. Don't keep your Haiku too long. Please, post it. I'd love to read it. Thank you so much, Omo. :)

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  9. Trips for good, I would think, are the best trips of all.

    A Trip Long Ago

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    1. Thank you so much for your wise words, MMT. :)

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  10. Where would we be if not for hope, marvelously written Balqis!!

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    1. You're right, Reshma. Let's not give up hope. Thanks! :)

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