Tuesday, January 10, 2012

And Again ...

















when birds are dreaming,
I am stuck inside four walls,
the fear - I see blanks.


within these white walls,
waiting for words to whisper,
then dance in my mind.


balqis
jan10'12


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30 comments:

  1. Sad but beautiful. It will pas and you'll see coloured again.

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  2. Emotional love it. I can relate, sometimes experiencing it here too, but *HOPE always lifted me up and show me the beauty out of that wall :)*smile*

    Blessed morning! :)

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  3. I have felt it many times Balqis..silence and being alone can give us fear inside..waiting for a reply for our questions but we woke up each day having the same feeling of waiting for answers to come..but someday when the right time comes light will shine again..keep smiling sis..have a blessed morning *hugs* ;)

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  4. Ok, this one I didn't really quite get it,I had to read it twice,lol, but still I admire your talent.

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  5. sooner or later things will pass, white pages are always part of someone's book in life

    thinking positive again! :)

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  6. When Balqis is writing,
    I am stuck inside four labs,
    the comment - I see blanks.


    within these blog posts,
    waiting for words to comment,
    then stance that i find.


    :P :P :P

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  7. Hmmm... Singkat, padat dan penuh arti.. membuat penasaran... good..

    Salam kenal ??
    Klo berkenan boleh kunjungi blog saya..

    Terimakasih..

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  8. You are one of a kind my friend, reading post is something worth it... Love your style of poetry, as always Balqis... short but soulful *~*Smiles*~*

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  9. Your writings are so wonderful ...I love your poems and this one is equally beautiful...Keep Writing!
    Keep Smiling :)

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  10. wonderful and meaningful.
    it sounds like something wrong.
    anyway keep strong :)

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  11. @Ana - Thank you so much! Nice of you. :)

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  12. @Sagittarian - Hope is always the strength to move on. Thank you so much! :)

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  13. @Sie - As always, there's light somewhere. Thank you so much! :)

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  14. @Miss Lego - You know, it's always nice having someone like you who's always here no matter what the post is. Well, actually, this is something to do with constraints. Thanks a lot, Miss lego. :)

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  15. @Aj - Thanks a lot! You perceived it well. Yes, positive thought must always be in mind. :)

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  16. @Israr - Dr. what a pleasant surprise! Your talent is slowly revealing itself. I like your Haiku answer. It's so cool! :)

    Thank you so much, Dr. Poet!

    *There's a surplus of :P
    Are they from the labs? :)

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  17. @Kang Jo - Terima kasih. Haiku ditulis singkat dan padat. Terima kasih di atas jemputan anda. :)

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  18. @Prime - Thank you so much! You never fail to let your kind words flow so nicely in your comments. I'm happy to hear from you. Thank you for liking my style of writing. :)

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  19. @Hisila - Thanks a lot for your compliment. So nice of you! Will surely keep on writing. :)

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  20. @Insp - Thanks for reading this post. Sometimes, it's so difficult to get something we wish for or sometimes, our wishes just can't be materialised no matter how hard we try. Really nice comments from you. :)

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  21. Hello Balqis.
    Sometimes, it's like that. Just keep courage & cling to that ray of hope. Where there's a will, there's a way.
    Nice imagery.
    Best wishes & thanks for sharing, my friend.

    Take Me Under Your Special Wings

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  22. So moving . . . creative . . . and beautiful, Balqis! *laughing* @ Israr :P

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  23. @Andy - I like that saying. Thank you for your encouraging comments. :)

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  24. @ ~*Princesa Fiona*~ - Thanks a lot! :)

    Israr is still too shy to show his talent. He could write poetry. It would be nice reading his Fibonacci and Cinquain. :)

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  25. hi balqis, great presentation..makes me feel like you are in a sad mood, anxiety..have a nice day

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  26. Oh my i am too late to post my comment, and the things which i thought of presenting as feedback has already been mentioned by your friends! :( :(
    Out of all inabilities,i think inability to express something through words is the most painful one! :)
    Very nice post Balqis......Keep going! :)

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  27. And yah........something is waiting for you in Saggi's post! drop by ASAP! :) ;)

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  28. @cooking-varieties - Thanks a lot. It all depends on how you feel about it. Yeah, sad is on one hand for the inability to accomplish something. :)

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  29. @Aakriti - Thanks for your perception. You could read my mind! Willl drop by Ros' blog. :)

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  30. I always don't fail to extend my appreciation for those person who deserve it my friend :) see you :)

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