Jan 18, 2012

Pining


















I miss you …
Like the butterfly misses the flower,
Like the flower misses the sun,
On a cold, dark night…


balqis
Jan18'12

29 comments:

  1. Hi Balqis :) I love it..:) Like me, misses my honey!! weeeehhh..:)) Love it! :) Hugs! :) Smile :)

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    1. Hi Ros! Thank you for liking it. You miss your honey? weeeehhh..:))

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  2. I can relate to it so much, all is beautiful Balqis, the image, your words and the feeling that goes with them.

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    1. Thank you for your kindness. Appreciate it so much! :)

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  3. Hello Balqis.
    I have a friend for whom butterflies have special meaning. Whenever I see them, they always remind me of her.
    Hope your sweetheart knows how you feel (smile).
    Simply lovely.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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    1. Hello Andy!

      Thank you for sharing a story about your friend. I love butterflies cos they're so beautiful!

      Andy, you make me smile when I see you smile! Thanks a lot for your nice words. :)

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  4. aw... I miss someone too, so much that it hurts not seeing her for a long time.. :(

    nice piece!

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    1. awww...Aj, I understand how unbearable it is! But surely, there's an antidote when you're able to communicate before seeing each other in persons.

      Thanks for visiting. :)

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  5. again,you have related the feeling with nature perfectly ! indeed only talented writer can do this and you are on of them :)

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    1. Again, I'm so happy to see you, Inspector. You "puji" me too much, nanti I tak boleh nak pikul pujian tu! Thanks a lot! :)

      P.S. Hope your studies go well. :)

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  6. It's a clever usage of simile, that comes off as very natural. Well done!

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. It means a lot. :)

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  7. Hey Balqis
    wonderful poem, I love the picture too =) keep up the good work! =D
    ^.^ looking forward to read more.

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    1. Hi Dana!

      Thanks for your compliment. Would surely love to write more. :)

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  8. Hi, lovely haiku, Balqis. Keep it up.

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    1. Hi Sam! Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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  9. this is so lovely Balqis, I love the image and the piece wow superb...

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    1. Thank you so much, Will. I humbly accept your kind words. :)

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  10. Quite deep and beautiful as always

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    1. Miss Lego, I appreciate so much your nice words. Thank you! :)

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  11. Very lovely my friend! I love your lines tonight... you are always abundance with your feeling everytime you give us your entry! Anyway my apology my friend, sometimes I don't have the time to be here but I wont forget your blog, I am not too far away :) see you :)

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    1. Hi Prime! Nice to see you again. As always, you bring along a gift of beautiful words.So nice of you! :)

      Now, don't apologise when you can't be here. I do understand life as a career person. Yeah, a blessing, you're just next door! :)

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    2. Thank you for understanding my friend, and as you can see I do write off-topics now, sometimes I just need a break, lol.... if in case you want to install a custom contact form here my friend you can check it out, another off topic! See you soon, yes, I am not too far away! ♥♥♥

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  12. You change back. I was not able to leave a comment but it is all right now.
    :)

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    1. I changed to the new threaded comment which is more personalized. I can reply below each comment. Thank you, Ana. :)

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  13. Aww, so sad -- but pretty! (: You have a pretty way with words, darling.

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