Sep 14, 2011

Wednesday Haiku

So near but so far...

awaited moment
face a face in distant land
through windows vista



writing with a smile,
balqis
Sept 14th '11
Wednesday







26 comments:

  1. You are so talented BB!

    There is sweetness and longing in this beautiful haiku, closed by a cute tot's smile!!

    Thank you for sharing this inner feeling!!

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  2. and through Windows 7 also.

    Best Wishes

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  3. @Od - Thanks a lot for your kind words. :)
    You're right! This simple Haiku talks of longing. The words - awaited, face, distant land and windows are enough to say it all. Thanks a lot for your perception! :)

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  4. @Eyewitness - Was thinking of it but I want to say in "words". It can be any "windows" as long as one can get connected. Thanks a lot for your nice comment and wishes. The same goes to you. Glad to see you here. Keep coming! :)

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  5. No distance is far when there is communication..

    Great haiku Balqis!.:) I loved it! Have a great day!

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  6. Ohhh..I love this haiku. It's just the way we all are!!! Two thumbs up for you Balqis.

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  7. When you want something..there will always be a way and even distance can't hinder two hearts that really care..love has always it's ways :)

    *lunch time sis*

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  8. @Sagittarian - In the era of technology, the farthest will become nearest! Thank you for your appreciation. Wishing you a great day, too! :)

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  9. @Sie - You always come here at lunch time! Hehehe...I'm waiting for a treat! Thanks a lot, sis!

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  10. Hey, Balqis.. I feel like it's about a special video call..haha.. isn't it?

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  11. I am so not techie but I can really feel the appreciation of something virtual that satisfies everyone's need today. ;')

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  12. Very nice. I enjoy your postings. They are refreshing!

    Please check out my new story blog - star-crossed-hearts.blogspot.com

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  13. wow....thats wonderful...windows vista...yes so near and so far :)

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  14. Nice one friend! Enjoyed it!
    Lots of love! :)

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  15. @Issa - Hehehe..that's so cool! Hey, thanks! :)

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  16. @Ning - It is! Thanks a lot. :)

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  17. @Evolution Woman - Thanks a lot for your nice comments. Will visit your blog but please, give me time cos now I'm very busy. Will be there, don't worrry. Thanks for being here. Appreciate it so much. :)

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  18. @Cindyrina - Of course, it's right in front of you! Thanks a lot. :)

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  19. @Muhammad - It is! Thanks a lot for your wow. :)

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  20. @Aakriti - Thanks a lot for your nice words which means so much to me. :)

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  21. Love this haiku! Can't wait to see more of them. =)

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