My eyes dance with the swaying leaves,
Rhythmically moving to the tempo of the wind,
Along with its soothing romantic music,
That flutters my heart and awakes the soul,
Savoring every minute, the need in endless time.
Feeling wonderful,
Balqis
Cool Thursday
Sept 22 '11
Image : free beautiful nature wallpapers
It's wonderful! Really wonderful post, full of meaning and full of happiness!.:)
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful day friend!.:)
This is just beautiful. Personally i'd put 'moving' instead of 'move' on the second line but asides from that, the poem gives off a rather peaceful (almost wistful) ambiance. Me likey :)
ReplyDelete@Sagittarian - Thanks a lot for your kind words. Have a wonderful day, too! :)
ReplyDelete@Arief - Oopss! didn't realise I typed wrongly. Correction done! Thanks for telling me and also for your kind words. :)
ReplyDeletea wonderful moment for each individual..so relaxing..and listening to music while giving time for yourself..it is truly rewarding to do it once in awhile :)
ReplyDelete*hello sis passing by hugs*
A wonderful post friend........:)
ReplyDeleteAwoo momenta of life- you captured so well, BB! Bravo- :)
ReplyDelete@Sie - The way you described it is so wonderful! Thanks, Sie. :)
ReplyDelete@Aaktriti - Thank you so much for your nice words. :)
ReplyDelete@Omo - Awoo! It's really nice to hear that from you. Thank you so much! :)
ReplyDeletehi balqis, when you mention the swaying wind, i remembered the loudest and consistent wind chimes i have ever heard was when i stayed in an apartment... such a beautiful sound...
ReplyDeletepity i dont hear it, now that i am staying on the ground.
its true the wind chimes give great peace
Your blog always makes me dream about better times....I really enjoy it...it's like my personal peaceful retreat.
ReplyDelete@CV - Sweet memories linger. The sound made by wind chimes is beautiful. Thank you, Wan, for sharing with us. :)
ReplyDelete@Andreea - Thank you for enjoying it. :)
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