Jan 12, 2012

The Rainbow


















The rainbow at dusk,

A beauty before darkness,

The heart enlightened.


Balqis
Jan12’12

28 comments:

  1. Greetings Balqis!
    I came to know about your blog through Sagittarian's recent post. And I must say that I am very drawn to your haikus. You have made very subtle descriptions of feelings in your haikus. Using just a few words you have explained the complex emotions in an artistic manner. Your words are *BEAUTIFUL* <3

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  2. Hi Sui! Welcome to my blog! Thank you for dropping by and for your nice comments. I feel honoured! Sagittarian (I like calling her, Ros) is such a nice person. She mentioned me not just once! I'm touched by her kindness.

    I love Literature and especially poetry. But my constraint is in writing good long poetry. At the moment, I write more on Haiku trying to convey my feelings or any other issues around me. Haiku is a short poetry comprising of 3 lines with 5-7-5 syllables.

    Thank you so much for your kindness. It means a lot to me. Wishing you happy blogging! :)

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  3. Hi Balqis! :) Another wonderful haiku from an icon of inspiration.I really love your haiku! :)

    Thanks for sharing!:)Wonderful evening Balqis!:)*smile* :)

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  4. speechless..you have mastered writing Haikus Balqis..your so good ;)

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  5. very exquisite ! very well penned down.

    you are the rainbow to this blog sphere indeed, you add beauty to the writing world :) keep it up :)

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  6. @Sagittaian - You pamper me beyond my worth! Thank you so much for liking my Haiku. Means a lot when it's appreciated. :)

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  7. @Sie - Thank you so much but honestly, I haven't reached that stage. I'm still learning. :)

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  8. @Insp S - How nice hearing from you! Oh....I really wish I'm the rainbow! I'm blushing in many colours just like the rainbow! Thank you so much, Insp! :)

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  9. nothing beats a real GOOD morning! :)

    keep smilin'!

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  10. What a beautiful photo; very relaxing and peaceful. (: I love it!

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  11. WoW! A breathtaking haiku and image to match! I LOVE rainbows! Well done, Balqis :)

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  12. @Aj - Another morning, another day! By the time I'm here, it's evening. Thanks, Aj. Hopefully, it's been a nice day for you. :)

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  13. @Lola - It's really a relaxing photo. Love nature. Thanks, lola. :)

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  14. @~*Princesa Fiona*~ - I love rainbow, too. Thanks a lot for your compliments. :)

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  15. Yay!Yay! Let's color up our lives! Thanks, Ana. :)

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  16. Another heart-written haiku my friend!

    Colors are true gift of nature indeed! It's a manifold creation that Science cannot absolutely explained! It is something human is really intertwined into! As we are part of nature! That's why our heat always settle at peace when we see it's beauty :)

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  17. @Prime - Thank you so much. You never fail to amaze me with your philosophical comments. It's always nice hearing from you, you know!

    I love nature's beauty. :)

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  18. @Philo - Thank you so much! :)

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  19. @Cindyrina - Thank you for your nice comment. :)

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  20. hi balqis, reading your poem/ haiku etc always enlightens the heart, mind and soul- justs like the bright color rainbow in your pic..cos you always touch on love...
    have a nice day

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  21. Hi Wan! As a nature lover, I love watching the beauty around me, sometimes relating it to feelings. Thanks you so much for your kindness. :)

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  22. Hey Balqis =)
    First time I ever visited your blog. I must say, very inspiring ^.^ I visited it from Sie's blog hehe. I like this poem, so lovely! I'd like to see more sooner =)

    Dana's Diary

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  23. Hi Dana! Welcome to my blog! Thank you for liking my Haiku. :)

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  24. hy balqis,,,your blog is very inspiring :)

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  25. Hi Betty! Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot. :)

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