Jan 17, 2012

Eclipse



Eclipse

of a feeling

casts by shadows of fear

 awhile, light is the saviour

of hope...



balqis
Jan17'12

**Inspired by ~*Princesa Fiona*~ at The Princess Passions.**

28 comments:

  1. So beautiful. Sad but this is part of life.
    Thanks for sharing!

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  2. Thank you, Ana. Life is a mystery. :)

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  3. This is so true Balqis,. Thanks for sharing! So Wonderful!:)

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  4. Ahh! You did a *wonderful* job with this Cinquain, Balqis!!! It's beautiful and very profound ~ love it! The image is perfect too! I can see you penning more of these because of your expertise in haiku! Thanks for taking this challenge ~ you always pass with flying colours, as far as I'm concerned! *Big smiles*

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  5. @Sagittarian - Thanks a lot. Have a wonderful day! :)

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  6. @~*Princesa Fiona*~

    Your kindness means a lot to me. Thank you so much for everything and most importantly for introducing other forms of poetry writing. It's really great learning from a well-versed person like you, Fiona. :)

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  7. weeeeee..I love it Balqis..covered darkness but a light will always shine..a symbol of hope for brighter days to come..passing by ;)

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  8. Nice. I like it because it grabbed me from one emotion to another,from darkness to lght.

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  9. hi balqis..the shadows of fear is only a small fraction of the night... beautiful eclipse.
    have a nice day

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  10. @cooking-varieties - Thanks, Wan. Have a nice evening! :)

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  11. @Miss Lego - I like the way you say it. Thanks a lot. :)

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  12. I have been come on this page after seeing Princess Fiona saying so many beautiful words about you on her blog...

    Ah..I must say..she is quite right! :D

    Though, I have not written anything remotely resembling a Cinquain, I am enjoying this form of expression from so many writers..

    Let the hope of light always shine.. :-)

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  13. Soulful! Beautiful! Creative! Fine!
    Queen of Haiku I am truly delighted with this! You responded the challenge with the flame of emotion! This is indeed loaded with willingness to win the challenge! See you there :)

    P.S. My life is back to normal again and so is blogging my friend, I miss most of your blogs :)

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  14. @Kunal - Welcome to my blog! Fiona is such a nice person. She gives so much guidance on how to write Cirquain and Fibonacci. I love her poems. :)

    May be you can join in the challenge. It's nice to know you enjoy reading this form of poetry. Thank you for being here. :)

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  15. @Insp Saahab - Nice to see you! Thank you! :)

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  16. @Prime - Glad to see you again. Nice to know you're back to normal life. :)

    Wow! Prime, you're always complimenting me beyond my worth. I always say that! LOL Thank you so much for your very nice words. Yes, I like challenges and tried writing another Cirquain. I need to do a lot more polishing! Thanks for being supportive. :)

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  17. Hello Balqis.
    Life and love are both a mystery...but I'm a curious soul and always looking for a new adventure.
    Beautiful expressions & imagery. Princesa Fiona has a way of bringing out our creative passions (smile).
    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Special Celebration (Part.1): Wedding Anniversary!

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  18. Hello Andy!

    You never fail to amaze me with your beautiful words. Thank you so much!

    Yes, Princess Fiona is a gem! :)

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  19. Very interesting, very creative -- very enjoyable! (:

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