Apr 23, 2011

Haiku - Why? Oh! Why?



(1)
Ignited by doubts,
Sparks the flame of jealousy,
Thoughts go ramming wild.



(2)
Struck by sheer naivety,
Surpassed all spots of plain truths,
Heart goes a-jumping. 



Pondering why,
Balqis
Sunny Saturday
April 23rd,2011


*It's quite disturbing sometimes thinking of what life has in store for us.  Mixed emotions could get out of hand when the mind's disturbed by something that appears out of the blue. I am not relating this to myself. It's written based on realities of life.  In this rat race life, stiff competitions in everything is obvious. Jealousy exists in many aspects such as envying others' achievements ,which is common. What's worse is when friends become Jekyll and Hyde. This is human!
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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Saturday, April 23, 2011

18 comments:

  1. The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)April 23, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    One of those pondering moments... Your Haiku, well, it certainly brings out what's on your mind.. :) Nicely pen.. :)

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  2. Balqis DBJApril 23, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    Thank you, Krislin. :)

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  3. MoonomoApril 24, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Your words captures the momenta- ;)

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  4. Balqis DBJApril 24, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    Thanks a lot, Moon. ;)

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  5. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    good blog dear.
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  6. Suresh ShresthaApril 24, 2011 at 2:54 PM

    So she looks, jealous!
    Looking from behind flowers!!
    Doubts, now bitter truths!!!

    Hey who is that damsel in distress?
    So cute!!

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  7. Balqis DBJApril 24, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    @Majid - Thanks a lot. :)

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  8. Balqis DBJApril 24, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    @Suresh - Hehehe..I'm also wondering who's that damsel?? Thanks a lot for your beautiful comments. You're too good in Haiku! :)

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  9. frissoApril 24, 2011 at 7:08 PM

    When we don't understand a situation is when we are most likely to be troubled. :)

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  10. FX777222999April 24, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Lovely poems, the lines came from your heart!

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  11. Balqis DBJApril 24, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    @frisso - Yes, that's right, Maria. Thank you for your insight. :)

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  12. Balqis DBJApril 24, 2011 at 11:21 PM

    @FX777 - Thanks a lot, Fernan. Yup, what I write are what I feel deep down my heart. Thank you, too, for the follow. Keep coming! :)

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  13. cooking-varietiesApril 25, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    hi balqis, i agree that sometimes certain emotional sparks, tickles the brain a bit. This is a beautiful poem..
    I must say you excel in your writing skills and wish you will do a guest post for me..not necessarily a recipe,could be a poem too, it can be a story relating to pumpkin- (since nobody has seen a turban squash before) - please reply via my comment box. And I will come back to your box here to acknowledge your response.thanks and have a nice day.

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  14. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 25, 2011 at 3:06 PM

    Nicely written Balqis...Happy blogging!

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  15. AnaApril 25, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    I have an award for you. It's the last post I published. Hope you like it.
    Ana

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  16. Balqis DBJApril 25, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    @cooking-varieties - You have such a nice post on turban squash. I keep coming back to your blog admiring that fruit! So tempting! I don't know how would I put it in words of my own. Give me time. I'll try.

    Thank you for your compliments. :)

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  17. Balqis DBJApril 25, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    @Valli - Thanks a lot, Valli. Appreciate it so much. I'm wishing you happy blogging, too! :)

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  18. Balqis DBJApril 25, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    @Ana - What a wonderful surprise! Thanks a lot for your much appreciated award. :)

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