Apr 28, 2011

Haiku - A Real Blast



















Stunning are your words,
Sweeten this life's bitterness,
So speechless, I am!



No one fits your shoes,
Its uniqueness solely yours,
Striking timelessly.




Fond thought,
Balqis
April 28th 2011
A sizzling Thursday evening.


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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Thursday, April 28, 2011

18 comments:

  1. StephaineApril 28, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    stunning words may hurt a heart in so many ways that we can ever imagine. Most of the time they conceal the truth for words are just spoken not done.

    hehe

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  2. Balqis DBJApril 28, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    It maybe, it may be not. Depends on what situation but by right, that's your say. Thanks a lot for being an early bird! Be here again! :)

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  3. AnaApril 29, 2011 at 2:00 AM

    I admire your writing so much. I can't do it.
    Yesterday I came but I felt shy to comment at the post below.
    :)
    I'm glad you accepted it.

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  4. The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)April 29, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    I preferred the second writing.. Both are greatly penned but I am feel more connected and relate to the second.. Say, sis, you pen out my thoughts.. :)

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  5. Balqis DBJApril 29, 2011 at 5:59 PM

    @Ana - Thank you! It's a boost for me to write more. :)

    Oh, you don't have to feel shy to comment. Just write it. It's a pleasure indeed being awarded by you. Thanks again. :)

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  6. Balqis DBJApril 29, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    @Krislin - Thanks a lot. I wrote what's on my mind. :)

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  7. MoonomoApril 30, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    Ok- I'm speechless. :)

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  8. mempawah creationApril 30, 2011 at 3:45 AM

    wow..., it's you make good poem, Haiku - A Real Blast. What is the haiku that name somewhere? like the beach? fun blogs. greetings.

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  9. Balqis DBJApril 30, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    @Moon - C'mon, speak up! LOL
    Thank you for being here. :)

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  10. Balqis DBJApril 30, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    @mempawah - Thank you so much. I don't know the haiku that name somewhere or some places. :)

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  11. Geeta SinghApril 30, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    lovely thoughts dear:)

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  12. Balqis DBJApril 30, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Thanks a lot, Geeta. It's always nice to get good words from friends. :)

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  13. AnonymousApril 30, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    Another wonderful Haiku!

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  14. Balqis DBJApril 30, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    Thank you, Steve! :)

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  15. Suresh ShresthaMay 1, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    Life-sweetening words
    Gratitude of yours so high
    Soft-hearted you are!

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  16. Balqis DBJMay 1, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    Suresh, what a beautiful reply! Thanks a lot. :)

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  17. frissoMay 3, 2011 at 6:45 AM

    "No one fits your shoes,
    Its uniqueness solely yours"

    I really love them lines :D

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  18. Balqis DBJMay 3, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    Maria, thanks a lot! :)

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