Feb 8, 2011

Reflection Of Life

Smiling at the face that smiles back,
Oh, so sweet, what a beauty!
So striking and lovely!
So comely and bonny!
So pleasant and pretty!

Never is a day drenched by angry rain,
Though there's an overcast of mad clouds,
Lo and behold, the smile beams brightly,
Depriving the chances of the overcast sky,
To explode its anger wildly without mercy

Smiling again at the face,
That smiles back confidently,
So priceless, so hearty,
So weightless to carry,
For now, forever,for eternity!



Just a reflection,
Balqis
Tuesday evening
08.02.2011


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18 comments:

  1. This is the exact opposite of all my poems till date :P
    Awesome work balqis :) Great to see such a happy piece and thanks for bringing a smile to my face :)

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  2. Thanks a lot, Harish. If this little contribution brings a smile to you, I for one would smile even more. If you're happy, I'm happy! :)

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  3. Beautiful... simply beautiful and u make my day.. I actually smile while reading the whole poem of urs... :)

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  4. I am displaying a big smile, BB!

    And from now on, I will smile even if I feel like frowning!

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  5. wow! Coolest cool approach!

    Smiling at the face that smiles back,
    Oh, so sweet, what a beauty!
    So striking and lovely!
    So comely and bonny!
    So pleasant and pretty!
    ...
    For now, forever,for eternity!

    Excellent wording, BB! :)

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  6. So sunny, I like it! Makes me smile :) :)

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  7. WOW! i never thought ning li's mommy writes very well! Lines beautifully constructed! Look! I'm smiling reading your post 'til commenting *wide grin* *blink blink*

    ahmmmm..i'm on diet, do you still have chocos?

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  8. @ONN - Thanks a lot. If it could make a difference, then it means something. :)

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  9. @Tony - Your smile is sweet as honey! No doubt, there are times when we have masks on. But if it could bring smiles to others, it's a good deed, indeed! Thank you, mi querida amigo. :) Me gusta tu sonrisa. :):)

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  10. @Moon - You pamper me! Soon, I'll be so spoiled! :)

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  11. @cookeezrus - Thank you for liking it. :)

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  12. @Beanizer_05 - No, a mommy's duty isn't revolving around diapers only. I know you're wearing one! Hehehe

    A mommy's hands rock the cradle that will rock the world! :)

    Hey, Beany, as you're on diet, I'll keep the chocos for Ning only. :)

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  13. Love your writing! Thanks for stopping by my blog.

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  14. @Steve - You're welcome! :)

    I love exploring your blog which has so many interesting posts. I'm thanking you too for being here.

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  15. hmp! i'm on diet that's why i will eat chocos ONLY..*sniff sniff*

    i know mommy's duty revolves on my lollies and chocos too:)

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  16. Hehehe Beany! You're having too much of lollies and chocos which will make you have sweet teeth! Am afraid ants will be attracted to you!

    You come here again sniffing for chocos, here's a box of it for you ---> L O L L I E S & C H O C O S

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  17. Nice and amazing art of literature.I saw your blog in bloggers.com and it led me to your work.
    Life is really beautiful and you have expressed it in one of the most beautiful way i have ever been through with words that are grasping and compelling.
    I shall surely make a point to come back again.
    Till then..
    Regards

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  18. Welcome to my blog, Dex! Thanks a lot for your inspiring comments. Life is indeed beautiful when we look at different angle of it. Of course, we have the ups and downs. But that's what make life even more meaningful.

    Thank you for being here. Keep coming! :)

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