Feb 1, 2011

Haiku - The State I'm In






















(1)

Throbs in head within,
Rhythmic  pace searing the skin,
Hard core pains remain.



(2)

Am I an alien,
Strange coarse voice invaded me,
Pink health snapped away.




Under the weather,
Balqis
01.02.2011
Tuesday



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17 comments:

  1. Get well soon Balqis! Can't believe you can write two haikus with all those bothering you. *kowtow*

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  2. Hello BB!

    You seem to be describing the discovery of an Elf of your own! I do hope you will be spared from that experience! :)

    Nicely conceived, maybe that's how, we human, experiment an alien mind invasion!

    A really good work! Your Haiku goes better and better!!

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  3. @LiLing - I guess, what I experience gave me the intant ideas to pen it down. Thank you! :)

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  4. @Tony - Thanks a lot for your compliments. I feel different that's why I said I'm an alien. Well, it happens to everyone at the time we're sick. Maybe, there's the existence of Elf - a Malaysian Elf! LOL

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  5. lol you poor thing!
    good job on the haikus tho! wish you luck!

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  6. even i ask this question to my self ''am i an alien?''very nicely emoted.

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  7. Thanks, Steve! Appreciate your visit. :)

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  8. oh as always im the last to know... i hope you are doing just fine... right now!!

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  9. Thank you, Stephaine. Whether you're the first or the last, your visit is always much appreciated. :)

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  10. Hope you are feeling better. Illustrative haikus.

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  11. Dear Six, your nice words are really comforting. Yup, I do feel better. Thanks a lot for your inspiring comment. :)

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  12. Harish, by the time you reach here, I'm already well! Thank you for your well wishes. :)

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  13. I hope Malaysian Elf collects the heads of your virus only! :)

    At least, they gave you a great haiku duo! Stay healthy- :)

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  14. Hehehe...Moon, he's doing his job. The virus have to be removed before they harm the whole system and cause a shut down!

    Thank you for your well-wishes. I'm ok now. :)

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