Jan 31, 2011

Missing Someone...

















Searching a face so familiar,
Sad to say, it isn't here,
Wish so much to be near,
With someone who's very dear.

Starring the sky so afar,
Hoping the days to be closer,
When you and I are together,
Sharing life with each other.

Like a gem, you're so rare,
Hard to get just anywhere,
Precious bond needs lots of care,
Losing you will make me scared.


Missing someone,
Balqis
31.01.2011
Miri Oil City


See image at : http://amandamache.deviantart.com
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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Monday, January 31, 2011

24 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:14 AM

    It is very beautiful poem, BB!

    Full of charm toward the wonder of belonging and sharing!

    You have what is needed to write good poetry!!

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  2. Balqis DBJJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:47 AM

    Thanks a lot, Od. It's always inspiring getting beautiful comments from you. Thank you, too, for making me smile at the start of the day. :)

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  3. ZezebelJanuary 31, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    ehm...and who could that person be? hikhik..

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  4. ZeanneJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    wow this is cool..nice one :)

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  5. Balqis DBJJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    @Zezebel - Ehemmm, who could that person be? LOL...playing a guessing game is fun! :)

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  6. Balqis DBJJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    @aNnE - Thanks a lot! And welcome to my blog! Keep coming. :)

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  7. HairymanFebruary 5, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Very beautiful balqis.
    This will melt anyone's heart for sure!

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  8. Balqis DBJFebruary 5, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    Thanks a lot, Harish. Your comments are my inspiration. Does it melt your heart? How happy I am, if you could feel it. :)

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  9. MoonomoFebruary 8, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    Hmm- Sad afternoon seems long (picture)- and your words feels it deeper!

    BB- bravo!

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  10. Balqis DBJFebruary 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    Yes, Moon, waiting is torturing! It drags on for days and seems having no end. I lack patience in waiting! Thanks a lot for your kind words. :):)

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Its Was A Wonderful Poem I Love The Romance You Put Inside Its Such A Charming Poet...

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  12. Balqis DBJFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:57 PM

    Anonymous - Welcome to my blog and thank you for your nice compliments. The feelings I put inside this poem are normal feelings that exist in everyone of us.

    Keep coming! :)

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  13. LizzyJune 30, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    So sweet..but sad :(
    I'm missing someone.. all my life

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  14. Balqis DBJJune 30, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    Thank you so much, Lizzy. There's always sadness when we really miss someone. I'm sorry to hear that you're missing someone all your life. C'mon, cheer up! God's wiling, you might be able to meet someone out there who's the right person for you.

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  15. LizzyJuly 1, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    I hope so, Balqis... Maybe, I just need time.. Thank you very much

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  16. Balqis DBJJuly 5, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    You're welcome. The right time will come. :)

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  17. AakritiJuly 19, 2011 at 11:27 PM

    loved this poem!!!!!! very beautiful :)

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  18. Balqis DBJJuly 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    Thanks a lot, Aakriti. :)

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  19. ShahinNovember 9, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Love this poem & the picture you selected expresses the poem...your expressions are awesome !!!

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  20. Balqis DBJDecember 3, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    Thanks a lot, Shahin. I'm happy that you like it. :)

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  21. GoddessChhaviNovember 28, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    Lovely! It touched my heart.

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    1. Balqis DBJNovember 28, 2012 at 6:08 PM

      Thank you so much, Chhavi. Your words mean a lot to me. :)

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  22. kaitedegrassFebruary 19, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    I like the sketch and the poem. :) im a struggling artist/poet myself. ;)

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    1. Balqis DBJFebruary 19, 2013 at 5:56 PM

      I love the sketch, too. Got it from deviantart. You can click on the link at the bottom of my post.

      Thank you for reading my poem, Kaite. :)

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