Jan 31, 2011

Missing Someone...

















Searching a face so familiar,
Sad to say, it isn't here,
Wish so much to be near,
With someone who's very dear.

Starring the sky so afar,
Hoping the days to be closer,
When you and I are together,
Sharing life with each other.

Like a gem, you're so rare,
Hard to get just anywhere,
Precious bond needs lots of care,
Losing you will make me scared.


Missing someone,
Balqis
31.01.2011
Miri Oil City


See image at : http://amandamache.deviantart.com

24 comments:

  1. It is very beautiful poem, BB!

    Full of charm toward the wonder of belonging and sharing!

    You have what is needed to write good poetry!!

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  2. Thanks a lot, Od. It's always inspiring getting beautiful comments from you. Thank you, too, for making me smile at the start of the day. :)

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  3. ehm...and who could that person be? hikhik..

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  4. wow this is cool..nice one :)

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  5. @Zezebel - Ehemmm, who could that person be? LOL...playing a guessing game is fun! :)

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  6. @aNnE - Thanks a lot! And welcome to my blog! Keep coming. :)

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  7. Very beautiful balqis.
    This will melt anyone's heart for sure!

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  8. Thanks a lot, Harish. Your comments are my inspiration. Does it melt your heart? How happy I am, if you could feel it. :)

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  9. Hmm- Sad afternoon seems long (picture)- and your words feels it deeper!

    BB- bravo!

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  10. Yes, Moon, waiting is torturing! It drags on for days and seems having no end. I lack patience in waiting! Thanks a lot for your kind words. :):)

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  11. Its Was A Wonderful Poem I Love The Romance You Put Inside Its Such A Charming Poet...

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  12. Anonymous - Welcome to my blog and thank you for your nice compliments. The feelings I put inside this poem are normal feelings that exist in everyone of us.

    Keep coming! :)

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  13. So sweet..but sad :(
    I'm missing someone.. all my life

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  14. Thank you so much, Lizzy. There's always sadness when we really miss someone. I'm sorry to hear that you're missing someone all your life. C'mon, cheer up! God's wiling, you might be able to meet someone out there who's the right person for you.

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  15. I hope so, Balqis... Maybe, I just need time.. Thank you very much

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  16. You're welcome. The right time will come. :)

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  17. loved this poem!!!!!! very beautiful :)

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  18. Love this poem & the picture you selected expresses the poem...your expressions are awesome !!!

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  19. Thanks a lot, Shahin. I'm happy that you like it. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Chhavi. Your words mean a lot to me. :)

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  21. I like the sketch and the poem. :) im a struggling artist/poet myself. ;)

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    1. I love the sketch, too. Got it from deviantart. You can click on the link at the bottom of my post.

      Thank you for reading my poem, Kaite. :)

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