1/27/2011

Acrostic Poem - FRIENDS

F - Friends are flowers in bloom
R - Rejuvenating fragrance at all times
I  -  Invigorating aura always sublime
E - Ever so sweet, full of charms
N - Never cease to be pleasant
D - Deserving love, care and attention
S - So vibrant,  nice to behold


















Inspired by friends,
Balqis
Thursday
27.01.2011


Image : capitolhillseattle.com

14 comments:

  1. This is a very good work, BB.

    Your choice of words takes the load of the theme.

    I like it very much!

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  2. Thank you, Od. It's an attempt on acrostic and so fragile. Still needs polishing. Thanks again for liking it. :)

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  3. Excellent work! You don't need any sort of polishing balqis. The flow was beyond perfect!

    You know one of those small reads which always bring a smile to your face? Well this one is definitely one of them! Great stuff!

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  4. Harish, thanks a lot for your encouraging words and compliments. A friend like you will catch me if I fall. Will lead me in darkness and show me they way out to find the light. Thank you for being such a nice friend and so young but with a great mind! :)

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  5. what a definition ..well done ..!!!

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  6. Sis.. I love this.. and it got me wondering.. Which letter do I fit in if there is only one for me to pick? Hahahha.. Nah, just some stupid and silly thoughts.. :P

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  7. Thank, Krislin. You deserve all the letters. :)

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  8. Even on the road to hell a flower will make you smile ! :) friends are like flowers :)
    good attempt ! :)

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  9. Thanks, jyotsna. I love flowers. :)

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  10. Thanks, Reut. It is dedicated to everyone of you. :)

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  11. You have much patience with writing poems and haiku!

    Wonderful Friend poem!

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  12. Six, thanks so much! I'm still on the path of learning and attempting on simple poems and Haiku. :)

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