Jan 27, 2011

Acrostic Poem - FRIENDS

F - Friends are flowers in bloom
R - Rejuvenating fragrance at all times
I  -  Invigorating aura always sublime
E - Ever so sweet, full of charms
N - Never cease to be pleasant
D - Deserving love, care and attention
S - So vibrant,  nice to behold


















Inspired by friends,
Balqis
Thursday
27.01.2011


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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Thursday, January 27, 2011

14 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:26 AM

    This is a very good work, BB.

    Your choice of words takes the load of the theme.

    I like it very much!

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  2. Balqis DBJJanuary 27, 2011 at 5:09 AM

    Thank you, Od. It's an attempt on acrostic and so fragile. Still needs polishing. Thanks again for liking it. :)

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  3. HairymanJanuary 27, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    Excellent work! You don't need any sort of polishing balqis. The flow was beyond perfect!

    You know one of those small reads which always bring a smile to your face? Well this one is definitely one of them! Great stuff!

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  4. Balqis DBJJanuary 27, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    Harish, thanks a lot for your encouraging words and compliments. A friend like you will catch me if I fall. Will lead me in darkness and show me they way out to find the light. Thank you for being such a nice friend and so young but with a great mind! :)

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  5. Geeta SinghJanuary 29, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    what a definition ..well done ..!!!

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  6. Balqis DBJJanuary 29, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    Thanks a lot, Geeta! :)

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  7. The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)January 29, 2011 at 2:32 PM

    Sis.. I love this.. and it got me wondering.. Which letter do I fit in if there is only one for me to pick? Hahahha.. Nah, just some stupid and silly thoughts.. :P

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  8. Balqis DBJJanuary 29, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Thank, Krislin. You deserve all the letters. :)

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  9. jyotsnaJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    Even on the road to hell a flower will make you smile ! :) friends are like flowers :)
    good attempt ! :)

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  10. Balqis DBJJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:34 PM

    Thanks, jyotsna. I love flowers. :)

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  11. ReutJanuary 30, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    It's beautiful! I love it!

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  12. Balqis DBJJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    Thanks, Reut. It is dedicated to everyone of you. :)

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  13. Six_33February 5, 2011 at 4:15 AM

    You have much patience with writing poems and haiku!

    Wonderful Friend poem!

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  14. Balqis DBJFebruary 5, 2011 at 4:25 PM

    Six, thanks so much! I'm still on the path of learning and attempting on simple poems and Haiku. :)

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