May 2, 2011

Haiku - I Want To Know



















I want to know why,
The sky is grey but not blue,
Solemn clouds pass by.


I want to know why,
The leaves fly with the wind, and
Bid the tree goodbye.



Inquisitive heart,
Balqis
May 2nd 2011
Grey Monday


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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Monday, May 02, 2011

20 comments:

  1. cooking varietiesMay 2, 2011 at 6:59 PM

    Hi balqis, i don’t think the leaves flirted with the winds, I think the tree divorced them- too many. Lol. I got this hangover from sardonic salad.
    I have done the opening post on the winter squash or other types of pumpkin etc. I have your name listed in there. In a day or two, I will publish the first guest post. From sardonic salad,a cartoonist blog. Will let u know each time I publish. please submit your post and url to me by email ok. Thanks…

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  2. Balqis DBJMay 2, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    Thank you, Wan. Why is the salad so sardonic? LOL. I visited your blog and read your post on winter squash. Thank you for listing my name. :)

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  3. cookingvarietiesMay 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    Hi balqis.. I want to know why was the sky was blue the last time I was here and now it’s grey... short poem but very meaningful. Anyway sardonic salad has posted, I think you will like to comment and I would love to preserve your comment  and you may also want to follow his blog. Have a nice day

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  4. frissoMay 4, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    This haiku is a tiny bit somber I do like it but I hope it doesn't mean your feeling a little low at the moment

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  5. Balqis DBJMay 4, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    @cookingvarieties - Thank you, Wan. Visited your blog and read your latest post. I was also at sardonic salad. Cool blog! :)

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  6. Balqis DBJMay 4, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    @frisso - Thank you for liking it. I wrote this haiku on a cloudy day. That's when I got the idea. It sounds somber but I'm fine here. :)

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  7. frissoMay 4, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    Sometimes poetry/haiku can be literal other times figurative, I have trouble telling the difference sometimes.

    Happy to hear this one was more literal and your fine :)

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  8. Balqis DBJMay 4, 2011 at 11:56 PM

    Yes, that's right, Maria.
    And my thanks again. :)

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  9. AnonymousMay 5, 2011 at 7:23 AM

    HI! I nominated you for a blog award. "The Stylish Blogger Award" fits you and your blog perfectly. You can collect it here: http://steveboss.blogspot.com/2011/04/stylish-blogger-award.html

    And Keep up the great blogging!!!

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  10. Balqis DBJMay 5, 2011 at 7:12 PM

    Thank you so much, Steve. You know, it means a lot. Thank you for your motivation, too. :)

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  11. Suresh ShresthaMay 5, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    Do you want to know?
    Making the way all clear for
    Rejuvenation!
    :)

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  12. Balqis DBJMay 6, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Thank you, Suresh! It's so nice! :)

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  13. HairymanMay 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM

    Mesmerizing moments where you just stare into the yonder world,
    and ponder upon thoughts which in the course of time are articulated and unfurled...

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  14. Balqis DBJMay 7, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    Harish, thank you for your very nice comment. :)

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  15. StephaineMay 7, 2011 at 11:18 PM

    there are no moment in my every visit that you dont astonish me with your haiku.

    I do realize that it's true we have a lot of simple question and yet the answer is so complicated than the question it self. Sometimes the shorter the question the harder the answer.

    BTW - I have something for you in my blog please do visit it. :) hehe

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  16. Balqis DBJMay 7, 2011 at 11:52 PM

    Thanks a lot, Steph. I'm honored getting the award. :)

    Thanks a lot, too, for your kind words. :)

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  17. cooking varietiesMay 8, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    Hi balqis, how many times have I visited you eh.. This site is really magnetic.. refresh my mind on your beautiful poem and I am happy ana is back too. Looking forward to visit you again. Take care

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  18. RawiyahMay 8, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    This poem reminds me of a momentary - or longer - ignorance that i sometimes feel at the outcome of something i can't control. And only later i eventually gain the wisdom behind leaves separating themselves from those things to which (i thought) they belonged eternally. I wrote something similar in y one blog, called The Garden Pot. Except, it's in prose.

    I actually came on here to say that i saw your blog post listed as one of the 'top topics in blogosphere' on the bloggers homepage. Congrats:)

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  19. Balqis DBJMay 8, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    @cooking varieties - Wan, I appreciate your visits so much. The doors to this blog are always open for you and everyone else. What I wrote here are just some simple writings that revolve around life. Please, come at any time, the more the better! :)

    Thank you, Wan. :)

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  20. Balqis DBJMay 8, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    @Rawiyah - Thank you for sharing part of what you have been through.

    Thank you, too, for noticing my blog at bloggers. :)

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