Dec 30, 2010

Haiku - King, Queen And Subjects














Arrogant ruler,
Of creed and greed of power,
Reigns mercilessly.


Queen of Hearts' heartless,
Love is so lifeless and dry,
Trashes of feelings.


Subjects' loyalty,
Tarnished, tormented, abused,
The rights of mankind.




Inner core feelings of,
        Balqis
        Mid-week,
          30.12.2010

10 comments:

  1. Subjects' loyalty,
    Tarnished, tormented, abused,
    The rights of mankind.

    Agreed!! Very very true.
    Like the king and queen stitch picture :P

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  2. You bite the reality! ;)

    Alas- being a King or Queen is the goal of Subjects! :P

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  3. @Moon, exactly! Thanks for your nice comments. :)

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  4. Love how you signed off :) You are my haiku master! *bows*

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  5. @yileen, thank you! You make me blushed. It's still a long way for me to be the master. Still in the learning process. Thanks for being here. :)

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  6. You're so good with haikus! I'm amazed how you're able to express so many things with just 5,7,5. :D

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  7. @LiLing, thank you, I'll accept it as a compliment. Honestly, I'm not that good yet. I'm still learning to make it better. :)

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  8. "Love is so lifeless and dry,
    Trashes of feelings"
    loved this sentence....give me high five....so well written...

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  9. @Sabita, thank you so much! Here's my high five! :)

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