Feb 13, 2012

Refreshing





In the morning of Monday,
Greeted by the sunshine so sunny,
A sweet smile curls to brighten up the day,
Fresh as morning glory, smiling sweetly,
Singing like a sun bird, so joyfully,
Wishing a day of no worry! 


balqis
Feb13'12

18 comments:

  1. Ah dazzling! I see the lovely morning in your beautiful poem Balqis. Very picturesque, not just the image but your poetry as well. It indeed is refreshing.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. Glad to know you see the morning in this simple poem. I always tell myself to think of Monday as a great day though sometimes Monday blues try to settle in! :)

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    1. Salam, Inspector. Thank you for your kind words. Your avatar is also refreshing with new image. :)

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  3. Balqis! I love this poem! I needed this refreshing post =) You made my day! I love the picture too...Have a refreshing morning xxx take care

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    1. Thank you so much for liking this post. It's an honour to make your day! Thanks, Dana. :)

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  4. So refreshing and sweet! This makes up my day Balqis, It feels like the sun is smiling to me!
    Have a fabulous day.

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    1. Thank you so much, Marie. Glad to know you feel the sun shining on you. Wishing you a great day! :)

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  5. Very nice, Balqis. The image is indeed refreshing! :-)

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    1. Thank you so much, Fiona. Your kind words means a lot to me. :)

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  6. Great sharing! I love the image and your rhyming words,..:)Thanks for sharing Balqis..:) Blessed and wonderful Tuesday! :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Ros. Glad you love the image and words. :)

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  7. Oh Balqis, once more you have made it. Just seeing the title made me refresh already and that was just what I needed. Beautiful words.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Ms Lego. It's always nice being showered with kind words of yours. :)

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  8. In the evening of tuesday,
    Greeted by the comment so funny,
    A sweet smile curls to lighten up your day,
    Fresh as hot coffee, drinking slowly,
    Sipping like a sun bird, so tastefully,
    Wishing a day of no worry!

    Plagirarized poem :P

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    1. Wow! Dr. you're really into poetry now. I'm so glad you do so. Your comment is so nice!

      It's alright, you can plagiarize me. Keep writing! :)

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  9. wow what a nice poem i ever read..thanks for the sharing balqis :)

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    1. Thank you, Narumi. Welcome to my blog! :)

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