Feb 25, 2012

Darkness In Life




Pain searing the heart
A goodbye, the most dreaded
The mark's so intense

balqis
Feb25'12

22 comments:

  1. *Painfully beautiful*
    Saying goodbye is difficult especially when the heart wants something else but the situation does not comply by the desires.
    You have written it very well Balqis. The feelings are crystal clear.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. You said it well. :)

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  2. Goodbye the painful word that I don't want to hear. But this is needed sometimes for us to be more stronger. I love the image and the way you shared the feeling of sadness.

    Blessed evening..:) Hug and kisses..:)

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    1. I understand you, Ros. We just can't help but face the sad goodbye in certain situations. Thank you so much. :)

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  3. Hey Balqis...Very interesting. I hope light enters our life and we won't have to feel darkness anymore...you have written it well, and it is painful take care Balqis =)

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    1. Hi Dana! How we wish light is always there to brighten up our day. Thank you so much for your nice comments. :)

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  4. Excellent selection of words and I truly felt the pain of this one, Balqis. That is what I consider to be *great* writing ~ when the words move feelings inside. Well done and the perfect image! :-)

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    1. Thank you so much, Fiona. Glad you could feel it. I'm honored getting that *great* writing comment. It means so much. :)

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  5. Hello sis Balqis..so painful and I felt it..can't say anything more..but the best poems that I have read is when you have touched the hearts of the people reading it..you have touched mine with your few words..have a happy Sunday ;)

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    1. Thank you so much, Sie. I'm quite speechless when you said you could feel it. I'm really touched, too, on reading your comments. :)

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  6. Very deep Balqis.
    Make one sit up and pay attention.

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  7. Hi Balqis
    I love photos like this as it can say a thousand words, and mean so many things to so many different people. Lovely blog as well.

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  8. commenting so late,
    in the wall of time,
    finding a gate.

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    1. It's ok. No complaint, comment at any time. You're welcome here. :)

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  9. My dear Balqis,
    Love is not possible without some sort of pain and yet, in spite of the pain, we continue to love.
    Very heartfelt poetry & imagery.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Please make sure you update your bookmarks with my new blog address: Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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  10. Balqis,

    I love the picture and the quote!

    Thanks for sharing..

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    1. Thank you, Darakhshan. Allow me to correct you. It isn't a quote but the Haiku I wrote. I love poetry. Thank you for your visit. :)

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