Feb 11, 2012

The Shed




mocked by passing clouds
under the blue umbrella
the sun can't kiss me


Balqis
Feb11'12


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24 comments:

  1. Lovely image and a touching expression through words. I like it very much.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. It means a lot when you like it. :)

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  2. The words, the rhythm, the image, all is there for a perfect poem, very refreshing and sweet.
    Have a lovely week-end Balqis!

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    1. It's so nice getting kind words from you, Marie. You uplift my spirit!

      Wishing you a fabulous weekend! :)

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  3. I love it, the poem and the picture, everything about it ^.^

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    1. Thank you so much, Dana. Appreciate every nice word from you. :)

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  4. This receives my WoWer Award! {|:-) The image and words are *exquisite*!

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    1. You know how much it means getting a WoWer Award? I'm beyond words to say how much I appreciate it from a great poetess. I'm trying my best to make the words and image complement each other. Thank you so much, Princess. :)

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  5. hi balqis, such a mesmerizing image of a beautiful umbrella of flowers and an equally unique poem in companion. have a nice day

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    1. Thank you so much, Wan. Appreciate your kindness.

      Have a nice day, too! :)

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  6. The image is wonderful, the poem is simple but deep and makes us think. Another great creation!

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    1. Thank you, Ms Lego. You never fail to inspire and encourage me. :)

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  7. There are so many ways one can interpret this poem after they have read it. I interpret it as, since people have mocked me, I will hide where they can't find me anymore and therefore, they won't be able to touch me or harm me.

    Just sharing some of my initial thoughts . . . the picture was beautiful as well.


    P.S. I hope your writing well never runs dry, for I truly enjoy reading your thoughts. :)

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    1. Hi Simply Me! Thanks a lot for your nice comments. I agree, every poem can be interpreted in many ways. This is my attempt to connect some instances of situations where certain things happen; things that revolve around us.

      Thank you so much for your encouragement and for reading my thoughts. It means a lot! :)

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    1. Hello Berlina! Your single comment means so much to me. Thanks a lot! :)

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  9. Done with a wonderful remarks, I love it..:)The image and the words on it..:) Muaaahhh ..Keep sharing more Balqis..;)

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    1. Thank you so much, Ros. I feel good hearing from you. :)

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  10. Thank you so much, ♥●• İzdihër •●♥. :)

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  11. I am into this haiku today but I'll get through this pain..just visiting you Balqis bye.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sie. It's so kind of you. I hope everything will be ok for you soon.

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  12. I like this post. Everything designs in nice way I got much information by this post. You should continue do this type of post.

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