Oct 10, 2011

Where I'd Love To Be

















The tranquility,
By the beach, watching the moon,
My heart is at peace.


Let me be alone,
The ripples, my night music,
The shore, my dance floor.


Yearning it to last,
Till the mountain disappears,
Till the night moonless.



A piece of mind,
Balqis
Oct 10th '11




Image : esheafer.deviantart.com


18 comments:

  1. When reading this,I actually feel like I was in that beach listening nothing but the sound of the waves and seeing that gorgeous moon above... nice feeling.

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  2. Hi! This is so peaceful post today.. Feel calm within your words.. And I love to be here too.:)
    Sometimes, we really need a place like this just to have time for our own piece of mind..

    I love this friend, keep it up!:) Have a peaceful day ahead!:)

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  3. @Miss Lego - Thank you so much for your nice words. I'm glad you feel it. :)

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  4. @Sagittarian - It's true we need a peaceful place after a hard day's work. Thank you for your kind words. :)

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  5. Oh my....this was so lovely! and beautiful......

    Let me be alone,
    The ripples, my night music,
    The shore, my dance floor.
    i would like to sing these lines hundred times!!1
    Great work! Keep going m friend! :)

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  6. Thank you so much, Aakriti. It means a lot when you show appreciation on this piece of Haiku. Certainly, you can sing the lines a hundred times and be happy! :)

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  7. same spot where I want to be..just enjoying yourself with it's calmness :)

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  8. The breath-taking scenery, the beautiful nature and the tranquility are what I need. You'll be in a complete peace at such a place. Thanks, Sie. :)

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  9. ...peaceful night is what we waiting for after a hardwork!!!

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  10. That's exactly what we need, Cindy. Thank you for commenting. :)

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  11. Lovely pic and words. Captures the essence of tranquility.

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  12. i can use my flippers in the shore *wide grin*

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  13. You can swim in the sand. Hehehe
    Funny! :)

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  14. So soothing to mentally and physically tired fellows, and me, too.
    One thing- I can't wish you to be alone, cos your heart can't want to! Could you wish to be devoid of those ripples, that shiny moon, the healing beauty of full-moon night? No, of course not! :)

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  15. Thanks, Suresh, for your brilliant ideas. :)

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  16. I lost words to comment here- :))

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  17. But the words you have just said are more than enough. Thank you so much, Omo. :)

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