Oct 10, 2011

Where I'd Love To Be

















The tranquility,
By the beach, watching the moon,
My heart is at peace.


Let me be alone,
The ripples, my night music,
The shore, my dance floor.


Yearning it to last,
Till the mountain disappears,
Till the night moonless.



A piece of mind,
Balqis
Oct 10th '11




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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Monday, October 10, 2011

18 comments:

  1. Miss LegoOctober 11, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    When reading this,I actually feel like I was in that beach listening nothing but the sound of the waves and seeing that gorgeous moon above... nice feeling.

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  2. SagittarianOctober 11, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    Hi! This is so peaceful post today.. Feel calm within your words.. And I love to be here too.:)
    Sometimes, we really need a place like this just to have time for our own piece of mind..

    I love this friend, keep it up!:) Have a peaceful day ahead!:)

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  3. Balqis DBJOctober 11, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    @Miss Lego - Thank you so much for your nice words. I'm glad you feel it. :)

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  4. Balqis DBJOctober 11, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    @Sagittarian - It's true we need a peaceful place after a hard day's work. Thank you for your kind words. :)

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  5. AakritiOctober 11, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    Oh my....this was so lovely! and beautiful......

    Let me be alone,
    The ripples, my night music,
    The shore, my dance floor.
    i would like to sing these lines hundred times!!1
    Great work! Keep going m friend! :)

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  6. Balqis DBJOctober 11, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    Thank you so much, Aakriti. It means a lot when you show appreciation on this piece of Haiku. Certainly, you can sing the lines a hundred times and be happy! :)

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  7. ✿Sie✿October 11, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    same spot where I want to be..just enjoying yourself with it's calmness :)

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  8. Balqis DBJOctober 11, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    The breath-taking scenery, the beautiful nature and the tranquility are what I need. You'll be in a complete peace at such a place. Thanks, Sie. :)

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  9. cindyrinaOctober 11, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    ...peaceful night is what we waiting for after a hardwork!!!

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  10. Balqis DBJOctober 11, 2011 at 11:56 PM

    That's exactly what we need, Cindy. Thank you for commenting. :)

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  11. SuzyOctober 12, 2011 at 2:14 PM

    Lovely pic and words. Captures the essence of tranquility.

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  12. Balqis DBJOctober 12, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    Thank you so much, Suzy. :)

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  13. beanizer_05October 12, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    i can use my flippers in the shore *wide grin*

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  14. Balqis DBJOctober 12, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    You can swim in the sand. Hehehe
    Funny! :)

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  15. Suresh ShresthaOctober 12, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    So soothing to mentally and physically tired fellows, and me, too.
    One thing- I can't wish you to be alone, cos your heart can't want to! Could you wish to be devoid of those ripples, that shiny moon, the healing beauty of full-moon night? No, of course not! :)

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  16. Balqis DBJOctober 12, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    Thanks, Suresh, for your brilliant ideas. :)

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  17. MoonomoOctober 13, 2011 at 8:02 AM

    I lost words to comment here- :))

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  18. Balqis DBJOctober 13, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    But the words you have just said are more than enough. Thank you so much, Omo. :)

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