Dec 23, 2012

Endeavour
















There is a  passion to weave words
into patterns of beauty,
Turning each one as charming as could be
and so precise like a diamond-cut,
Words woven in unique patterns,
A beauty that will last in the eyes,
Even more lasting in the heart,
That won't fade in the seasons of time,
Becomes timeless through ages and ages.
balqis
Dec23'12

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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Sunday, December 23, 2012

22 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 23, 2012 at 11:42 AM

    You've truthfully captured the thoughts of a poetic writer.

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 23, 2012 at 2:52 PM

      Thank you so much, Floral. It means a lot especially from a poetess like you. :)

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  2. UnknownDecember 23, 2012 at 3:02 PM

    such a nice poets http://reignheartbeau.blogspot.com/2012/12/the-essence-of-christmas.html

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  3. oktay usta yeşil elmaDecember 23, 2012 at 9:00 PM

    great poem!

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  4. The Muslimah CornerDecember 24, 2012 at 3:27 AM

    Hey Balqis! Excuse me for not visiting your beautiful blog for some time, this is such a wonderful inspiring poem! Thank you for sharing this with us :-)!

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 26, 2012 at 9:42 PM

      It's alright, Dana. You can be here at any time.

      Thank you so much for your wonderful words. Will keep sharing whatever I could. :)

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  5. RhippleDecember 25, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    This is so lovely. Short. Simple.

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 26, 2012 at 9:44 PM

      Thank you so much, Rhipple, for your kind words. :)

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  6. ZunnurDecember 25, 2012 at 9:44 PM

    A beautiful reflection of a poet's passion. Thoughts and emotion turned into words carefully selected, polished and beautifully woven together to portray a feeling.

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 26, 2012 at 9:46 PM

      Thank you so much, Zunnur. Actually, your words make me speechless! :)

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  7. Jolly PrincessDecember 26, 2012 at 2:18 AM

    MERRY CHRISTMAS to YOU and you LOVED ONES! :)

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 26, 2012 at 9:59 PM

      Such a nice greeting. Thank you but I don't celebrate Christmas. Merry Christmas to you, Jolly. :)

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  8. RicDecember 27, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    Captivating thoughts! You're a good poet!

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 28, 2012 at 6:29 PM

      Thank you so much, Ric. It's still an endeavour to be a good poet. Will try to write better. :)

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  9. MoonomoDecember 30, 2012 at 7:21 AM

    Love those line of yours! Holds a very warm feelings in heart- and "A beauty that will last in the eyes". :))

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 30, 2012 at 8:10 AM

      Thank you so much, Omo. I appreciate your kindness. Means so much! :)

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  10. Aunt MaryDecember 30, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    very lovely poem beautiful words love the way you express your thoughts

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 30, 2012 at 5:48 PM

      Thank you so much for your kind words. It's nice to see you here, Aunt Mary. :)

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  11. JohnDecember 31, 2012 at 5:35 PM

    You are a very talented person. It was very nice written poem I must say!

    By the way, can you please contact me on the email found in the bottom of this page?:
    http://www.topbloggers.net/become-a-top-blog/
    It would be very much appreciated as I don't know how to contact you.

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    1. Balqis DBJDecember 31, 2012 at 9:05 PM

      Thank you so much for your kind words, John.

      Will check out your blog. :)

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