Dec 6, 2012

Stagnant














wishes are like stagnant water,
when words seem so scarce,
whatever  is wished to be expressed,
inside it stays ......

undeveloped, unsaid,
unspoken, unseen, 
unknown, unheard

stagnant


balqis
Dec6'12




14 comments:

  1. BALQIS DEAR FRIEND.. I´M SO GLAD BECAUSE I FOUND YOU IN MY BLOG. YOU ARE SO SWEET AND GREAT POET. KISSES. ELEN

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    1. Dear Elen, how happy I am to see you again! I miss the moment when most friends were here.

      You're just as sweet, Elen, and a great poet, too. It can be seen in the poems you write; the high standard of it. Loved your poems and I'm so glad you have it translated to English.

      Thank you so much for being here. I miss you! Stay connected! :)

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  2. hi balqis, it has been a long time since I passed here. I've been very busy..

    anyway, i love this one.. it's the same feeling I have right now..

    Great poem!

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    1. Hi Aaron! I know you're a busy buddy! It's ok, Aaron, it's not mandatory for you to be here. LOL

      Thank you so much for liking this vent-out-kind-of-thought. Sometimes, I'm in a difficult situation when knowing not how to convey what I wish for. So, it remains stagnant. Glad you could relate to it. :)

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  3. Hey balqis, I really love the poem! Keep up the good poetry work ♥

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    1. Hi sweet Dana! Thank so much for loving it. I'll try to keep it up. :)

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    1. Hi Sushma! Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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  5. I love your poem!
    Happy to have found your blog!

    Best regards Anna Karin, Sweden

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    1. Hi Anna! Welcome to my blog! It's such a pleasure meeting you. I just can't thank you enough for your kindness. Such kind words inspire me to explore more into creative writings. Thank you so much! :)

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  6. I love the way you put your thoughts into beautiful words!
    Sometimes words aren't sufficient to express your feelings. Your poem reminds me of an old P.Ramlee's song.

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    1. Thank you so much, Zunnur. P.Ramlee's songs are always evergreen. :)

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