Oct 21, 2012

The Chase



















a little girl at heart
I hold on to happiness
it slips through my fingers


balqis
Oct21'12

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    1. I'm so glad to read your comment which is much appreciated and meaningful to me, too.

      Thank you so much, Assm. :)

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  2. Sometimes it does feel as if there are things we try to hold on so tightly but they slip through our grasp like sand. Your haiku reminded me of that.

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    1. Indeed it is, Sui. That's when we feel so disappointed.

      Thank you for your nice comments. :)

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  3. Well penned! The poetry really fits with the image! :-)

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    1. Thank you so much, Dana. Your words lighten my heart. It's always nice seeing you here. :)

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  4. This time there is some different taste, I just felt so. Your words seem to be chasing the little cutie successfully.

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    1. Thank you so much. You make me smile. :)

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  5. Thank you so much, I have responded to your comment on my blog. Have you read "Water"

    Take Care

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    1. You're welcome! Thanks to you, too, for the response.:)

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  6. I agree with the comments above, these are very meaningful words. :)

    I really like this Haiku. :)

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    1. Hello Kleopatra! It's nice to see you again and this time you bring happiness to me with this sweet comment. Thank you so much, my friend. :)

      I'm talking about the happiness which slipped through my fingers, as it is clearly stated. I'm sure you'd understand. Thank you again for being here. :)

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