Oct 9, 2012

Haven

















every moment so precious
precious than glittering diamonds
sweetness of life exudes pleasant thoughts
of days with blue sky and golden rays

just a moment ago, it seems
in the streams of pleasant memories
carried away in the singing breeze
to a place unknown but a paradise

what does it matter, doesn't matter
the chaos louder than rolling thunder
what really matters, does matter
haven of new found land a-discover




balqis
Oct9'12



20 comments:

  1. What does it matter, doesn't matter, that new found land just as sweetest as of feeling and being with unknown-

    You make the moment greatly, BB-

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    1. That's what haven is! So, grab the moment. :)

      Omo, thanks a lot for your nice words. You make me smile! :))

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  2. such a sweet choice of words :)

    It sounds magical!

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    1. I'm honored to hear that, Aj. You're so kind. Thanks a lot. :)

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  3. I like the rhyming...it's cute. Simple is beautiful. :-)

    It seems like if I'll base it from this poem, you are contented and happy with where you are today.

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    1. Thank you so much, Joan. I just wrote the poem without any connection with what I go through. It's just a simple creativity.

      Appreciate your comments. :)

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  4. As always....it's a beautiful poem. You are so talented Balqis.

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    1. Thank you so much, Christine. You pamper me again! :))

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  5. Great! I love it! :) More hug and kisses...:)

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    1. Your kindness means so much. I'm happy to see you again, Ros. :)

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  6. awsome and so unique..nature seems close to me:)

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    1. Your words are too big for this little work but I like it! It's always nice to be close to nature. Thank you so much for your comment. :)

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  7. My dear friend Balqis : beautiful your poem. It´s a great moment to read you. I thank you very much for visiting my blog I became very happy to see your name and the Crystal too. Nice friends you´re. kiss Elen

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    1. Hi Elen! It's so nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your compliment. You're a nice friend, too. :)

      I love going to your blog because it's good to be there. :)

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  8. Great blog!
    Cheers from Argentina.
    HD

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    1. Hi Humberto! Welcome to my blog!

      Thank you for your visit. :)

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  9. Beautiful lines...
    Wonderful thoughts!
    Have a great and blessed day!

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    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful lines, Ric.

      Wishing you a great and blessed day, too. :

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