every moment so precious
precious
than glittering diamonds
sweetness
of life exudes pleasant thoughts
of
days with blue sky and golden rays
just
a moment ago, it seems
in
the streams of pleasant memories
carried
away in the singing breeze
to
a place unknown but a paradise
what
does it matter, doesn't matter
the
chaos louder than rolling thunder
what
really matters, does matter
haven
of new found land a-discover
Nice one... :)
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Thank you, Assm. :)
DeleteWhat does it matter, doesn't matter, that new found land just as sweetest as of feeling and being with unknown-
ReplyDeleteYou make the moment greatly, BB-
That's what haven is! So, grab the moment. :)
DeleteOmo, thanks a lot for your nice words. You make me smile! :))
such a sweet choice of words :)
ReplyDeleteIt sounds magical!
I'm honored to hear that, Aj. You're so kind. Thanks a lot. :)
DeleteI like the rhyming...it's cute. Simple is beautiful. :-)
ReplyDeleteIt seems like if I'll base it from this poem, you are contented and happy with where you are today.
Thank you so much, Joan. I just wrote the poem without any connection with what I go through. It's just a simple creativity.
DeleteAppreciate your comments. :)
As always....it's a beautiful poem. You are so talented Balqis.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Christine. You pamper me again! :))
DeleteGreat! I love it! :) More hug and kisses...:)
ReplyDeleteYour kindness means so much. I'm happy to see you again, Ros. :)
Deleteawsome and so unique..nature seems close to me:)
ReplyDeleteYour words are too big for this little work but I like it! It's always nice to be close to nature. Thank you so much for your comment. :)
DeleteMy dear friend Balqis : beautiful your poem. It´s a great moment to read you. I thank you very much for visiting my blog I became very happy to see your name and the Crystal too. Nice friends you´re. kiss Elen
ReplyDeleteHi Elen! It's so nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your compliment. You're a nice friend, too. :)
DeleteI love going to your blog because it's good to be there. :)
Great blog!
ReplyDeleteCheers from Argentina.
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Hi Humberto! Welcome to my blog!
DeleteThank you for your visit. :)
Beautiful lines...
ReplyDeleteWonderful thoughts!
Have a great and blessed day!
Thank you so much for your beautiful lines, Ric.
DeleteWishing you a great and blessed day, too. :