Nov 29, 2011

When Footsteps Stray














It saddens me to say,
when flowers turn grey,
and footsteps will stray,
in thousand miles away,
but I will always bear,
our friendship, a souvenir,
in my heart, your name stays.



Image : free images of  footsteps

24 comments:

  1. wow. awesome.
    friendship is always one of the best souvenirs in life.
    friends come and go, but they stay in our hearts :)

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  2. Great!I love it!:) Sweet poem from a sweet friend :) Have a nice day!:)

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  3. @Inspector - Thank you so much! Friendship is a priceless souvenir. Friends may go but the sweet memories of befriending them will always stay in our hearts. :)

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  4. @Sagittarian - Thank you so much for liking it. It tells how I feel and how much I appreciate friendship. :)

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  5. Beautiful and so sweet - friends are never far away...........even in the distance we can feel them close.

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  6. Thank you so much for your kind words, Marie. I agree even if friends have to leave us, their presence will always be felt. :)

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  7. Friendship is one of the most important relations we have.
    I loved this poem and the rhymes.

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  8. It is, Ana! Without it life is imbalance. Thank you so much for your appreciation. :)

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  9. With our friendship life is hard .Love your poem.

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  10. @♥●• İzdihër •●♥ - Thank you so much for liking it. :)

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  11. This is beautiful, with a nice message within.

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  12. WoW! It's PERFECT and so beautifully penned, Balqis! LOVE it!!! :)

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  13. @Miss Lego - Thank you so much for your nice words. :)

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  14. @Lady*♥*Fiona - Thank you so much for the WoW. Your kind words will boost me to go further. :)

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  15. Awesome Balqis. Touches the soul as well as the heart when reading it.

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  16. @Berlina - Thank you so much for your nice comments. :)

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  17. @Cindy - Friendship should be for keeps. Thanks a lot. :)

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  18. yes friendship is a sovenir and the most precious :) beautifully written :)

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  19. Thank you, Dr. Appreciate friendship so much whether it's in real or virtual. Thank you for being my friend! :)

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  20. You have written this piece so beautifully! Good work. :)

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  21. Hi Vinati! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm happy! :)

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  22. truly friendship is always to keep and treasure ... this is a lovely poem for a friend ... thank you for sharing ... best regards!

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  23. Yes, that's what friendship is. Thanks for your comment, Will. Appreciate it. :)

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