Mar 15, 2011

A Dreamer























Haphazard Dreams....



I dream of swimming like a fish,
But I don't have fins to steer me through.



Twinkling are the stars above my head,
I need more fingers to count them all.



A beautiful flower I should be,
Full of fragrance, love by all.



......Alas! how little I am,
A dreamer of my dreams!



A dreamer by nature,
Balqis
Tue 15.3.11



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14 comments:

  1. Dreams make one happy. :) I'm a dreamer, day and night.

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  2. Hey, you never know! Remember inception? :)

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  3. @Liling - Thank you so much. :)

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  4. @Hairyman - Thank you, bro. Yup, I remember. :)

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  5. The first thing you should do is learn to swim..he he

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  6. hi balqis- short poem, not long winded- better that way. your have good ideas >after reading your latest 3 posts..

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  7. Such a nice dream you have had that makes us have a beautiful one like that!
    Wish much more about your dream!!
    Just let us know something more!!!

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  8. Well expressed... brings out how the reality limits the dream.. Great Write...

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  9. @Kumaha - Thanks for your advice. You know, I can't swim and dependent on float only! :D

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  10. @cooking-varieties - Thanks a lot for your kind words. It means a lot! :)

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  11. @Suresh - Life's a dream for me. Surely, some more will be unfolded. Thanks for yr nice words. :)

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  12. @Krislin - Thank you for your wise words. It's just a simple write-up cos I got the writer's block again! Couldn't write much. :)

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  13. I love this one. I can't swim like a fish either (I can't swim at all!). Keep dreaming and writing about them :)

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  14. Cookee - I know, I'm not alone! Lol, both of us can't swim but let's just dream on. Thanks a lot! :)

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