Mar 7, 2011

It Rains In The Heart






















Much as the heart dreaded it, the overcast successfully trespasses it, poking at every wall. The impact is so devastating, it overshadows the rays of hope. The persistent darkness envelops the fragile heart. Gripping it so hard, depriving the dear little heart of its regular fresh air supply and almost cutting it off.  Poor heart, it flutters and gasps hard for that little much needed air to keep going before the final fullstop.

"Arrrgghhhh!" cries the heart with all its might. "I'm not ready yet!" It tries to shake loose from the gripping overcast. The pain is so unbearable. It sears and tears like a charging bull, sparing not a single part of  the heart.

The little heart being inquisitive asks questions like flying bullets as to why it is deprived of its rights. The rhythmic lively beats have gone. In its place is a very weak throbs which seems to be on the verge of passing out.

The overcast couldn't hold it much longer. So out goes the gush of rain raging at every single cell of the heart. The unexpected rain  has no mercy as though avenge for unknown reasons. Despite the efforts of  freeing itself from the torment, the harder it tries, the heavier it rains, flooding the heart's floor and immersing it in complete coldness.

Icy coldness sends shivers right into the core of the heart and in a little while, it'll be drown in the torrents of rain. The heart isn't giving up too easily. It has won half of the battle . It lets out a shrieking cry, "No! I'm not going to give in. I'm not ready to go to the Land-Of-No-Return!" The cry has woken up all the pulses which start to work and pump a sudden flow of blood and fight back  the flood of rain.

And with one last tug, the heart cries again, " I'm not ready to go to the
"Land-Of-No-Return!"



Image : artuproar.com

20 comments:

  1. :O Amazing description and personification here! It's literally heart-stopping!

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  2. wow my friend your so good.You have described it the best way it should be.Hats off to you :)

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  3. So wonderful is the expression!
    Each and every heart, of course,wishes to beat longer.

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  4. @Hairyman - Thanks a lot, bro! :)

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  5. @Sie - Thank you,my friend, for the hats off! :)

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  6. @Suresh - It's true, indeed, we wish it to beat longer. Thank you for your nice words. :)

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  7. Such a warm and lively description. It's hard to resist the personal calling from the heart, but once in a life time even the heart has to suffer because of the preferences it makes.
    You have expressed each associated words in such a manner that it kept me glued for more and more...

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  8. Balqis Greetings,
    I am have been amazingly dragged to your blog simply coz you write so well. You have got quite an amazing skills.
    The heart has always been the subject of discussion. We suffer physically but the desire that gurgles from inside of the heart persist us to suffer like there is no tomorrow. Love has always been seen as the part of the heart and as i finished reading you blog i felt rightly attached, in the sense that it touched my heart.
    Looking for more.
    REGARDS.

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  9. @Poker - Thank you for your very nice words. :)

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  10. @Dex - I'm flattered by your kind words. Thanks a lot! :)

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  11. Hi Ning! It's so nice of you to say that. You make me proud! Thank you. :)

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  12. *reading*
    ► munching chocos ◄

    no! i won't let that heart reach the land of no return..can i just give that little heart my floaters so it won't get drown?..

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  13. Beanie - Oh sure! if it's a life saver, pass it to me! Thank you. :)

    P.S. Why do you always make me drool looking at those yummy chocos? It's a habit of yours coming here with chocos! Mouthful of it!

    Hey!...look at what I have here. I'm enjoying a big bar of Cadbury Bournville fine dark chocos. You want some? Let's barter trade! Or better still barter chocos! :p

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  14. Yes, this is a sample of what talent can deliver!

    Thank you, BB!

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  15. Thanks a lot, Od! Your words are always inspiring. :)

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  16. I hate crying because I have to wipe my nose as well. But it is does helps. :)

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  17. Sometimes, it's hard to hold back tears. Thanks a lot, Princess, for being here. I'm so glad to see you again. :)

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  18. btw, that is my mommy JP(jolly princess)!
    she doesn't supply me my milk allowance so..i just beg for chocos..
    barter??? *looking at chocos*
    hmmmmmm....ok! *biting choco, reaching* here! let's barter! dark cadbury!!! yumyum!!!

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  19. LOL @beanie...your mommy's here. And yu're so much into chocos. Maybe it's better than milk. Hey, thanks! for the barter trade! :)

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