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in between us
there are seas
I couldn't swim across
but the bridge of friendship
keeps us close
in between us
time and seasons change
nevertheless we are the same
travelling abreast in time
singing the same rhymes
in between us
our thoughts sometimes differ
yet each day we understand better
of who you and I are
the bond of friendship grows stronger
© 2013 Balqis
In between us...
ReplyDelete...the mystic of friendship open its wings and make a solid ground over the quicksand of loneliness, and sadness.
You do not lose your poetess skill, BB
Thank you!
Thank you so much, Od, for adding another line and make this poem more meaningful. Understanding, empathizing, respecting, supporting are parts of friendship.
DeleteMuch thanks for your compliment. :)
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI really like the message!
Your words mean a lot, Ric. Thank you! :)
DeleteLovely friendship poem , thank you for writing the beautiful piece of poetry :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aunt Mary. :)
DeleteBeautiful and meaningful Balqis! Friendship does not know boundaries. Friendship overcomes differences. Friendship is timeless.
ReplyDeleteTake care and thank you for your wise words.
marie
Thank you, Marie. Indeed you're right about friendship. I'm glad to have you as my friend. :)
DeleteWell crafted poem, Balqis..Enjoyed reading :)
ReplyDeleteI'm honoured to hear that. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you, Panchali. :)
DeleteBeautiful lines!! Love the hidden warmth of a wonderful relationship....
ReplyDeleteThanks, Epsita. :)
DeleteFriendship is always special :-)
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is! Thank you for commenting, Amrit. :)
DeleteThe depth of this kind of friendship is priceless, Balqis. I am fine with only rare friends as long as the relationship is how it is in this poem. Your words are beautiful, my friend. ♡ :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Irene. :)
Deletethe poetess is now in a different colour with a different variety of the poetic cuisine, after the success of haikus... bravo...keep going ... trema kasih :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your compliments. Actually, I'm still in the process of learning. Terima kasih, Dr.! :)
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