Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Dew


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soft, dewy touch
brings hope to a cracked heart
rejuvenation


© 2013 Balqis


This Haiku is my participation in Haiku Heights #313 - Dew.


30 comments:

  1. A touch means everything, very nice !

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, Cheryl. :)

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  2. I love my warm hugs. It momentarily takes away all your problems and makes you feel nice and safe. Nice post Balqis.

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    1. Loved what you said, Rumpunch. Thanks so much for commenting. :)

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  3. brings hope - such a wonderful underlying premise to a great haiku

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    1. Thank you, Judith, for giving me the credit. :)

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  4. Rejuvenation a great way to finish this.

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    1. Thank you, Pea, for your approval. Appreciate it. :)

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    1. Thanks, Mirage, your words mean a lot. :)

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  6. What we'd do without the soft dewy touch of consolation!

    Your interior beauty can be read between lines here, BB

    Thank you!

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    1. Much thanks, Od, for reading between the lines. I'm so glad to read you.

      You're most welcome! :)

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  7. Balqis, this is a wonderful Haiku of expectations !

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    1. Thank you so much, Usha. Your words boost my confidence. :)

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  8. love the peacefulness within the lines..wonderful use of dew...

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  9. A beautiful haiku ... the purity of dew.

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  10. Beautiful Haiku Balqis. Words that really show how gentle and beautiful you are inside!
    Love from France

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  11. It brought me hope too and a broad smile. :)

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    1. Thank you, Sui. It's nice to hear from you again. :)

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  12. "bring hope to a cracked heart" Very nice line. Cracks will let the love in.

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    1. Hopefully it'll be as you said, Alice. Thanks for commenting. :)

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  13. I love everything about dew. It just give a refreshing and peaceful feeling.

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    1. That's how I feel it, Christine. Thanks for your comment. :)

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