Jul 21, 2013

Recalling


a face 
of anxiety
sweaty
blushing
when kissed
by the sun
at midday June
under the canopy
of blue


© 2013 Balqis

14 comments:

  1. This is the most compelling stanza of true love I've read in a long time.

    Just the sun, placed in a lover's place, can bring that yearning disguised of anxiety!

    Bravo, BB!!

    Thank you for letting us follow this thread!

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    1. Od, this is just another effort of mine in writing micro poetry. You know, I was playing with words when thinking of the scorching heat of June and came up with the title. I don't know how it could be perceived by readers as always the case is when reading poetry we have many versions.

      If it is the most compelling, then I feel honored because the fact is I didn't know it would be so! Thank you so much for being supportive and giving me the driving force to venture further. Your comments are always very much appreciated. :)

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  2. Yes, in the month of June every face is kissed by the sun and the result is that what you have written .Lovely new thoughts again dear, you always give me surprise with your brand new ideas :)

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    1. I'm humbled by your kindness, Aunt Mary. I want you to know it does surprise me a lot. Thank you so much for reading my little work. :)

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  3. Romancing with summer ... I loved your choice of words ... beautiful !!!

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    1. Thank you so much, Amrit. I'm honored! :)

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  4. Beautiful expression of Romancing the sun:) Loveeeedddd it again Dear:)

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    1. Much thanks for your comments, Epsita. :)

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