Jul 20, 2013

Denying Marks Of Time


behind patted powder
lies nicely those wrinkles
marks of the past
yet wisdom keeps growing
fresh and supple
ironing out the wrinkles



This is my first participation in One Single Impression Prompt 280 : Wrinkle


© 2013 Balqis

16 comments:

  1. another thought provoking lines!
    very nice Balqis, have a nice weekend!

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    1. Thank you so much for your support, Ric.
      Wishing you a great weekend! :)

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    1. Hi Princess! Welcome to my blog.
      Thanks for your comment. :)

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  3. Wrinkles can be hidden.
    But the wisdom they bring are not so easy to conceal.
    Your expertise is growing beyond measure!

    I am very happy to read your beautiful lines.

    Thank you, BB, for sharing all the beauty that dwells in your soul!

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    1. Thank you so much, Od, for your uplifting words which mean a lot to me. You never fail to boost my confidence to write more though I'm still trying to write better! I'm also very happy to read your nice comments.

      I'm glad you're happy reading my humble lines. You're most welcome! Sharing is a beautiful thing to do. You should know why I used "Wisdom" there. :))

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  4. YES, WISDOM HIDDEN BEHIND WRINKLES, LOVELY CONCEPT ,I LIKED IT SO MUCH :)

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words, Aunt Mary. :)

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  5. Wisdom can really justify those wrinkles ... very beautifully said !!!

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    1. Indeed, Amrit, that's what I think. Thank you for your compliment. :)

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  6. AWESOME Lines Balqis as always:)) Decorated with Truth and a little whisper of sadness within....loved it!!

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  7. No wrinkle can compare to the vast amount of wisdom that face carries. So amazingly written Balqis! I love the fact that you write on a variety of subjects. They are all so thought worthy. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. I'm touched by your kind words. :)

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  8. Ah, the hoary head, full of experience, knowledge and wisdom. They have lived to tell a tale for us to fear and hear. Enjoyed your post Balqis.

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    1. Couldn't agree more. Thank you so much, Rumpunch. :)

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