Feb 10, 2017

Recalling The Moment



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my 
dreams
seem  real
everything so vividly
pictured here, in my mind  
I could feel it , its beauty embraces me
my heart flutters and sends a gush of  excitement to my whole being
I wish  to be in these dreams forever, for they are mesmerizing and fulfilling my soul with the eternal beauty of paradise
but alas, some dreams  remain as dreams floating freely among dots of clouds 
without any special haven to land on to
slowly falling apart from reality
dispersing very faintly
into nowhere
leaving
me



© 2017  Balqis


** I posted this Fibonacci before. Today I'm re-posting it but this time I edited some lines.
 

10 comments:

  1. Greatly done, BB- so nice to read your Fibonacci after a long time. :)

    You know, the pattern amaze me- and you've done excellent job here.

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    1. Thank you so much, Omo. It's always nice reading your comments.

      Again, much thanks for your continuous support. So much appreciated. :)

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  2. Impressive. Not only the poem, but the message

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    1. Welcome to my blog, Martin!

      Thank you so much for your comments and for interpreting the underlying message. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Wanda. You make my day! :)

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  4. I remember writing Fibonacci poems a long time ago! It's good to read one again Balqis.
    Have a lovely day (or night) - not sure what time it is on your side of the world!

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    1. Would love to read your Fibonacci, Marie. Please, write again.

      Thank you so much for your visit. We are so far away at a different part of the globe. The moon is almost full right now. When I see the moon, you'll surely see the sun. Wishing you a great day ahead! :)

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  5. Such impressive lines. I am bookmarking this for the days I feel little unmotivated or if I do not feel like continuing my journey.
    Loved it.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kindness, Epsita.

      Sorry for the late reply. Was so busy.

      Thanks again. :)

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