4/30/2014

Sound



the stream sang softly
solace to a quiet soul
was here once, now gone


Written for Haiku Horizons prompt "Sound".

© 2014 Balqis

28 comments:

  1. Nothing is forever, except love!

    Now gone, but memories give their warm to loneliness!

    This is a beautiful haiku, BB!!!

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    1. Indeed sweet memories will stay for a long time. "Genuine" love will last forever, too.

      Much thanks, Od, for your beautiful comments. Loved it! :)

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  2. So true Balqis, memories have a bittersweet ring to them.

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    1. You're right, Reshma. Thanks for commenting. :)

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  3. Very reflective Balqis, this has a serenity about it.

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  4. Lovely lines Balqis.......Embracing a silent whisper of some deep story (may be a love story)...

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    1. So nice of you, Epsita. Thank you so much! :)

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  5. What sweet sounds you've written here.

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    1. I'm glad when you could feel it. Much thanks for your kind words, Rallentanda. :)

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  7. luv the resonance of fluidity

    much love...

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    1. I'm happy reading you, Gillena. Appreciate so much your kindness. Thank you! :)

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  8. Something lovely but something sounds sad as well. Somehow I am touched. So nice Balqis.

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    1. Life always has its bitter-sweet sides. I think it isn't complete without these two.

      Much thanks, Christine, for your comments which touch me. :)

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  9. Swimming into the deepness of your Haiku- Speechless!

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    1. Thank you so much, Omo. You make me speechless to comment. Appreciate your words. :)

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  10. Forever is never so we must cherish what we have now. One day it will be gone and the peace that we once enjoyed will wither away with it.
    I am glad that your incredible haiku are still here for me to read. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. I'm happy to read you again.:)

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  11. Forever is a lie.Everything is destined to meet and part and that's the life!

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    1. Thank you for sharing your thought, Zarnab.

      Sure, I'll be at your blog. :)

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  12. Salam Balqis! your words are beautiful as always. I can't help but to feel sadness and longing hidden behind the haiku.

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    1. Wassalam Zunnur. It's been awhile. Nice to see you again.

      Thank you for reading this Haiku. I just penned my thought based on the prompt. :)

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