Apr 17, 2014

Close


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no star is alone
closely bonded with the rest
a view from my room


Written for Haiku Horizons prompt "Close".


© 2014 Balqis

16 comments:

  1. I feel like friends are a bit like stars. Together, we are a chain, linked together by an invisible link.
    I love this one a lot Balqis.
    Have a lovely day!

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    1. I feel it, too. Thank you for liking my humble work, Marie. Have a lovely day, too. :)

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  2. Exquisite...!!!....close knit....yet so far :(

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    1. Thank you, Panchali. I really appreciate your words. :)

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  3. the first line is powerful and ambiguous...love it....

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    1. It's a pleasure reading your comment, Sumana. Thank you! :)

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  4. Stellar wisdom!! Invisible lines seems to connect those dots in the universe.

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    1. They could be there, who knows. What we can see they are so close to each other. Thank you, Reshma. :)

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  5. exquisite take and wonderful words ,Balqis !

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  6. Glowing light that bonds afar- just like the souls comes closer being separated- :))

    Nice haiku, BB!

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    1. I visualise what you said, Omo. Beautiful feeling! Thank you! :)

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  7. This is a beautiful thought, BB!

    A joy, and contentment for the heart to share.

    If you look closely on the clear sky there is a small sparkling
    star which is alone yet, it is waiting for its companion and then
    they will be together for Eternity. Maybe it is not the only one alone,
    in time all of them will be a complete set. :)

    I love this haiku, because it is close!

    Thank you, BB.

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    1. Loved what you said, Od. Thanks for reading.

      "Close" itself could be interpreted in many ways. Yes, indeed it's so close but not reachable yet!

      The pleasure is mine.

      Have a nice day, Od! :)

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  8. They are together and they are alive. A nice view it is! Nicely Balqis!

    Hank

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