Jun 11, 2013

Companions


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four walls all around
as quiet companions
loneliness, not so



© 2013 Balqis

22 comments:

  1. Loneliness not so...No we are never alone that is true... :) we only are if we think we are ;) *wink

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    1. That's right if we really think about it. Thanks, Hotei, for your comments. :)

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  2. awesome. i love it! especially with the picture^^

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    1. Thank you, Essma. I love the picture, too. :)

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  3. Ho yes the picture is just perfect! I agree 100% with Essma

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    1. Credit goes to the owner of the picture on deviantart. Thanks, Hotei. :)

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  4. Some times we feel lonely even in crowd but some times when we are alone we don't feel alone :)

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    1. You're right, Aunt Mary. Thank you. :)

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  5. Such a beautiful haiku, BB!

    Deep in its form, new in its composition.

    You can give a nice and different interpretation to loneliness!

    You are the Balqis of haiku! Chapeau!!

    Thank you for letting us enjoy your talent!

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    1. Thank you so much for your compliments, Od. :)
      I'm smiling from end to end!!

      Was thinking about loneliness - the idea developed when I looked all around me, there were walls. So, it wasn't really loneliness after all.

      For the honour - Merci! :)

      Thank you for reading this Haiku.

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  6. Dear Balqis,
    So much can be interpreted from this image. As usual, you penned your thoughts nicely. Well done!

    Thanks also for your recent visit. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to stop by...my schedule these last few months is just ridiculously crazy and I don't get to write as much or visit my blogging friends as often as I used to. I appreciated your comment though. Wishing you a wonderful weekend!

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn...

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    1. Hello Andy, thank you for dropping by and your comments. I understand your busy schedule and that's your priority. You're most welcome to be here at your convenience. :)

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    2. Always thoughts accompany us..

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    3. That's right, Zarnab. So, we're never alone. Thank you. :)

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  7. We long for a good company....
    but we have to bear with it, sometimes...
    Very nice haiku! Love the image!

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    1. I agree with you, Ric. Thank you for your nice comments. :)

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  8. Loneliness is just a state of our mind ... well said :-)

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    1. We're never lonely after all! Thanks for your comments, Amrit. :)

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  9. Hey Balqis. Hope you doing good. I always loved the way you write your haiku poems, it makes me think. ^__^ Keep it up.

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    1. Hi Dana! Yeah, I'm doing good and I hope you, too. I'm so pleased to know you like my Haiku. Thank you so much. Surely, I'll try to keep it up. :)

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  10. Quietness, stillness, a great time to think without distraction. The picture conjures up so many different thoughts I really don't know where to start Balqis.

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    1. I agree with you, Rumpunch. You have already commented and a nice one, I thank you for that. :)

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