Alone...
on a breezy evening
rustles of leaves are whispers
from a whispering tree
whispering words
only known by me
Alas...
I have company
they are all around here
right beside me
Hi Balqis, saw your blog at Bloggers.com and follow you here. Love the quotes you write and I hope we can be friend on my inspirational Christian quotes blog. God bless.
The first part of the poem created such a beautiful image and them bam. Just as you wrote, I could see myself being disturbed while taking a leisurely stroll alone by someone or something like a ringing cell phone. :D
Wow! As I was reading your inspiring poem I could see myself sitting, alone, somewhere in nature, listening to it´s words, hearing it´s sounds and communicating with it´s spirit. Love it! Mary
Thank you so much for liking this simple poem. I'm happy to know how you could relate to it and I love it when you mentioned nature. Its beauty is always captivating.:)
Hi Balqis, saw your blog at Bloggers.com and follow you here. Love the quotes you write and I hope we can be friend on my inspirational Christian quotes blog.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Hi Eve! Welcome to my blog and thanks for following. Sure we can be friends. :)
DeleteAll alone? but who's your company?
ReplyDeleteAnyway, very nice lines..
Just dropping by again...
It's in the lines! Actually, it's quite difficult to answer your question, Ric. Anyway, thanks for dropping by again.:)
DeleteThe first part of the poem created such a beautiful image and them bam. Just as you wrote, I could see myself being disturbed while taking a leisurely stroll alone by someone or something like a ringing cell phone. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sui, for your nice comments. Yes, sometimes things happen out of the blue and it's good if it's a pleasant surprise. :)
Deletewow beautifully written, Balqis.
ReplyDeleteYour wow means so much, Dana. Thank you. :)
DeleteThoughts....thoughts follow me even when I'm alone...they whisper...they accompany me
ReplyDeleteHi Hotei! I couldn't agree more. They come in many forms. May be sometimes it's quite hard to pen them all down. Thank you for your response. :)
DeleteYou turn a 'lonely' poem into a lovely moments that surround you. At least that's how I feel reading this. As always it's a lovely poem Balqis.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your sweet comments, Christine. Let not loneliness takes control of everything. :)
DeleteWow! As I was reading your inspiring poem I could see myself sitting, alone, somewhere in nature, listening to it´s words, hearing it´s sounds and communicating with it´s spirit. Love it!
ReplyDeleteMary
Thank you so much for liking this simple poem. I'm happy to know how you could relate to it and I love it when you mentioned nature. Its beauty is always captivating.:)
DeleteAnd you cannot see them!
ReplyDeleteBut the hearing of those words and murmurs are the fountain of love!
Beautiful!
Your words are beautiful enough, Od. I'm always lost in the beauty of nature.
DeleteThank you for your sweet comments. :)