Feb 15, 2013

Out Of The Blue















Alone...
on a breezy evening
rustles of leaves are whispers
from a whispering tree
whispering words
only known by me
Alas... 
I have company
they are all around here
right beside me


balqis
Feb15'13

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16 comments:

  1. Hi Balqis, saw your blog at Bloggers.com and follow you here. Love the quotes you write and I hope we can be friend on my inspirational Christian quotes blog.
    God bless.

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    1. Hi Eve! Welcome to my blog and thanks for following. Sure we can be friends. :)

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  2. All alone? but who's your company?
    Anyway, very nice lines..
    Just dropping by again...

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    1. It's in the lines! Actually, it's quite difficult to answer your question, Ric. Anyway, thanks for dropping by again.:)

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  3. The first part of the poem created such a beautiful image and them bam. Just as you wrote, I could see myself being disturbed while taking a leisurely stroll alone by someone or something like a ringing cell phone. :D

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    1. Thank you, Sui, for your nice comments. Yes, sometimes things happen out of the blue and it's good if it's a pleasant surprise. :)

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  4. wow beautifully written, Balqis.

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    1. Your wow means so much, Dana. Thank you. :)

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  5. Thoughts....thoughts follow me even when I'm alone...they whisper...they accompany me

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    1. Hi Hotei! I couldn't agree more. They come in many forms. May be sometimes it's quite hard to pen them all down. Thank you for your response. :)

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  6. You turn a 'lonely' poem into a lovely moments that surround you. At least that's how I feel reading this. As always it's a lovely poem Balqis.

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    1. Thank you for your sweet comments, Christine. Let not loneliness takes control of everything. :)

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  7. Wow! As I was reading your inspiring poem I could see myself sitting, alone, somewhere in nature, listening to it´s words, hearing it´s sounds and communicating with it´s spirit. Love it!
    Mary

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    1. Thank you so much for liking this simple poem. I'm happy to know how you could relate to it and I love it when you mentioned nature. Its beauty is always captivating.:)

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  8. And you cannot see them!

    But the hearing of those words and murmurs are the fountain of love!

    Beautiful!

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    1. Your words are beautiful enough, Od. I'm always lost in the beauty of nature.

      Thank you for your sweet comments. :)

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