let it be like a big roll of wave
that takes away every little bug
which causes much nuisances
let it all be rolled up and smash
into the deepest part of the ocean
letting the mind to fly in freedom
let it all be a story in the fold of history
remember it not lest the pain persists
just roll it up and leash it tight forever...
balqis
15march'12
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That's the voice of a person who is ready for a fresh start. Wonderful words Balqis! I love the way you have metaphorically connected the natural happenings of the water bodies with the emotions of moving forward. This is a very motivational read with optimistic thoughts afloat.
ReplyDeleteI'm touched by your comments, Sui. Your words are much appreciated and needed and make me feel the surge to move on. Thank you so much right from the bottom of my heart. :)
DeleteIt sounds like you are feeling better and that's a good thing.
ReplyDelete-Mara
Yes, I'm feeling better. Thank you, Mara. :)
Deleteso positive Balqis..I love the last lines..all I can say is be ready with the tides of life..we can't see when will it hit us but at least we are still sturdy standing when it comes..I needed this now..I have another tide but then again I won't give up..thank you for your message Balqis ;)
ReplyDeleteI like your thoughts. Sometimes, I think I'm wasting my energy if I keep thinking the worse things that happen in my life. It's better to make use of it for something else which is much better. Thank you so much, Sie. :)
DeleteThis is what we all need Balqis, acceptance.. Let's not be afraid or have fear, because there is someone above who's always there for us.. Let's leave it all to HIS hands, our guide and light through life's journey..
ReplyDeleteI love this post..:) Thanks for sharing ..:) God bless..:)Keep sharing,.:)
You're right,Ros. Fear always stops us from going anywhere. I always believe in the Almighty. He knows everything.
DeleteThank you for liking this post. God bless you, too. :)
Heya Balqis =)
ReplyDeleteLet it roll away! Indeed, God is always looking at us, thinking of God will make things roll away, thanks for sharing the poem
Take care and welcome back <3 ^.^
Hi Dana! That's what I hope for. Thank you so much! :)
DeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you need a good getaway from the hustle & bustle. That's an amazing view in that image. Nicely penned. Take care my sweet friend.
I have a request: Please can you consider removing word verification. It's very hard to decipher some of the words. You could have comment moderation instead (like I do on my blog) if you're worried about spam.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn...
Indeed, I really need it. :) Thanks for your comments.
DeleteI didn't know you've to go through words verification. Nobody told me until now. It's troublesome. Will see to it. Thanks, Andy. :)