Mar 10, 2012

Coldness


















Faint smile in darkness,
The sun refuses to shine,
Cold, broken feeling.


balqis
10March'12


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32 comments:

  1. I understand what your feeling Balqis..be strong..I know you will someday smile again *hugs*

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    1. Thank you so much for empathizing. Yeah, life must go on. :)

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  2. Welcome back Balqis,:) Everything would be fine..:) Beautiful haiku, thanks for sharing..:) God bless us all..:)

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    1. Thank you for the warm welcome. It's nice reading your comforting words. :)

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  3. This is sad and touching. I am very well aware of this kind of feeling.
    Good to see you posting again. Hope that you are doing well. Take care!

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    1. Thank you for understanding this Haiku. I'm slowly making a come back. Thanks for being here, Sui. :)

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  4. Excellent piece, a bit cold for me because indeed I felt the cold hittin on my face but, beautiful!

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    1. Thank you, Ms Lego, for your kind words. :)

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  5. very great piece of writing Balqis, I hope you are okay, God is always watching

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    1. Thanks, Dana. I'm okay now. Thanks for your concern. Yes indeed, Allah is always watching us. :)

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  6. Balquis
    This post reminds me of a saying 'Still waters run deep'. Nice post, the picture says it all.

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  7. This was a sad haiku to read, but beautiful. I hope that you are doing okay . . .

    BTW, my poetry blog is "under construction" at the moment. I'll let you know when it's "back-in-business" again.

    Blessings to you!

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    1. Thank you for feeling the sadness in this Haiku. Yes, I'm doing ok.

      Surely, I'd love to visit your blog. Thanks for telling me. :)

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  8. Awesome as usual my friend.
    I can relate to that feeling, Balqis.
    Hope you are better now.

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    1. Thank you, Berlina, for being able to relate to this Haiku. I'm getting better. :)

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  9. what a sad piece :(

    it's been a while since I dropped by here.. I've been so busy lately.. so how are you? :)

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    1. Thank you, Aj.

      I'm doing just fine atm. Nice to see you again, Aj. I hope you're doing well. :)

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  10. These lines are so well written, so full of strong emotions. Happy to read you again Balqis. Praying soon you'll feel better, after darkness the sun shines again, always. Take care

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    1. Thank you for your perceptions, Marie. glad to know you're happy reading this piece of Haiku. Thanks for your prayer. I'm feeling quite ok now. :)

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  11. "Broken feeling" speaks it all! :)
    Nice one.

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  12. Hello.
    Now that I know you've not been feeling well, I can understand the meaning behind this Haiku. It's amazing how the sun can change our mood.
    Very nice all the same. Thanks for sharing.

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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    1. Thank you, Andy. Your words are very comforting. :)

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    1. Thank you, Ricardo. Your blog is sweet, too. :)

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