Apr 19, 2015

Deed


memories engraved
in his heart and still so warm
a hero unsung
but in the song of the wind
there is a tune of his name


© 2015 Balqis


15 comments:

  1. Unsung heroes are blessed though they may not be known readily. It is a question of what goes around comes around! Great lines Balqis!

    Hank

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    1. Surely they are! Thank you for your words, Hank. :)

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  2. And the tune will resonate deep :-)

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    1. Thank you, Amrit, for saying so. :)

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  3. Another great Tanka, BB- :))

    Keep 'em coming!

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    1. Hey Omo! Thank you for your comment and encouragement. I need that! :)

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  4. Keep them coming, Balqis! Great lines!!

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  5. Lovely to read you again Balqis and even more with these lovely lines. Take care.

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    1. Thanks, Marie for your continuous support. Happy to see you again.:)

      I still visit your blog as usual but couldn't leave comments. I don't know why. I read your recent post. A really amazing poem. Thank you for sharing. :)

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  6. Wind knows the name of that unsung hero and she likes to sing his name.
    So beautiful Balqis, just loved that thought :)

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    1. Literally speaking, it does, Aunt Mary. :)
      My imagination brings me to that extent.
      Thank you for your kind words. :)

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  7. I really appreciate your professional approach. These are pieces of very useful information that will be of great use for me in future.

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