Oct 28, 2014

Hope


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among million stars
some hopes embedded somewhere
life is but sweet dreams


© 2014 Balqis


My participation at Haiku Horizons prompt "Hope".

24 comments:

  1. How very true Balqis! We can see them twinkling and one from among them should be able to accept one's yearnings. There has to be one for our sweet dreams.There has to be hope! Nicely!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you for your nice comments, Hank. :)

      I'm still on a long journey (hopefully it is) of Haiku writing. Still needing the real touch of it. :)

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  2. Sometime its just blink, sometime disappear- but indeed they embedded somewhere! How nicely you remind the hope, BB-

    Thank you. :))

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    1. Blink, disappear and appear. I can't say where but hope is among them. :)

      I'm just playing with words, Omo. Another humble attempt on Haiku. Still trying to learn more cos haven't got the hang of it.

      My thanks to you, too! :))

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  3. that is really touching..i loved this haiku!!

    :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Ankita. :)
      I'm truly touched by your words.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, Pagal. :)

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  5. Might there be some bittersweet dreams as well?

    Hope Laid Waste

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    1. That's part of life, you know. Without it, it isn't complete!
      Thanks, Mark. :)

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  6. Sweet dreams ... I love this definition of life :-)

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    1. I'm happy to know that! Thank you, Amrit. :)

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  7. A million of our dreams are kept alive star-like with the power of hope. Inspiring Balqis! :)

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    1. Thank you, Sui. Your words mean a lot. :)

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  8. Agreed, nic one. Love the photo too.:)-

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  9. Dreams get realized cause we never lose Hope. Lovely and significant poem Balqis.
    xx

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    1. Indeed they are! Thanks, Marie, for your wonderful comments. :)

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  10. Wonderful as always.. lovely writing my dear friend , hope you are doing great :)

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    1. Thank you, Aunt Mary. I'm doing good. :)

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    1. Happy Holidays, Ning! <3

      Thank you for dropping by. :)

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