Oct 22, 2014

Release


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cloudy in the mind
to release but the unknown
least they fall as rain


© 2014 Balqis



14 comments:

  1. Letting it fall, letting it flow- cheer up the mind-cloud- :))

    Nicely penned, BB-

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    1. Thank you, Omo, for your continuous support. :)

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  2. Sweet rain.

    Is it possible to leave off the anti-robot words? They're very difficult to read and cumbersome to navigate.

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  3. It's always a wonderful gift when words flow like rain from my cloudy mind. ;-)

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    1. It sure is! :)
      Thank you for your comment. :)

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  4. And the rain will drench our souls :-)

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    1. I appreciate your kindness, Ankita. Thank you! :)

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  6. This haiku resonates my thoughts whenever I see rainfall. It's as if we can let all our despondence wash away with the rain.

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    1. If only we could do that. Thank you, Sui, for your comments. :)

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