Aug 6, 2013

Sweet Melody Remains Sweet

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a song on air
a story recited
in rhythms of music
a soul healed
from injuries of the past
in counts of minutes
the sweet melody
erases slowly
those bad memories
the pleasant ending
touches the heart
and lives in it


Today I "read" a story in a song and enjoy the good lessons in rhythms of music and beats of tempo which show the itinerary of life from grey to brightness.

© 2013 Balqis


  1. sweet melody and memories remain sweet, indeed!
    love the thoughts! and the image as well!

    1. Hi Ric! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm happy reading them. :)


  2. Brava ragazza!

    In an easy and wonderful rhythm you are singing a beautiful verse.

    I can hear the voice of the poem telling to the reader:

    A rose in musical paper is a perfumed song, a song that puts a balm to the aches of love, and at the same time it puts soft melodies in the heart making it to beat in affection again!

    I really think your poem is wonderful!

    Thank you, BB.

    1. Grazie mille! Non lo so io sono buono, ma apprezzo il credito. Sono così onorato. :))

      I hope I'm correct. It's been awhile I didn't talk in another different tongue. :)

      Much thanks for your wonderful comments. You uplift my spirit with all the encouraging words. You never fail to do so and that boosts me to keep on writing though along the journey I stumble and fall. But with people like you around, I'll get up again!

      My pleasure to share this little contribution. When you really think it's wonderful, I can't help feeling wonderful, too!

      You're most welcome, Od. :)

  3. Music has a power to delete the bad memories , I loved the poem :)

    1. I couldn't agree more. Music plays a vital role in setting our moods from bad to good. Some have the soothing effect which is good to de-stress us after a hard day's work.

      Thank you so much for liking this poem, Aunt Mary. You make my day! :)

  4. Sweet melodies are there to remind us that life can be good too, that tomorrow can be better. Music can calm our twisted & worried moods.
    Lovely poem dear Balqis.

    1. Indeed you're right, Marie. I could relate it to some of your inspiring posts which I love reading. Thank you so much for your inspiring comments and kind words. :)

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    1. Thank you, Iremi. Wishing you a blessed Eid Mubarak! :)