Saturday, January 19, 2013

Unseen


In the darkness of the darkest night, there are stars twinkling behind thick clouds.
In the brightness of a sunny day, stars are there, camouflaging themselves in the rays
In the deepest depth of the biggest ocean, precious pearls hide from prying eyes.
In the farthest part of the earth, waiting to be discovered are priceless diamonds.


balqis
jan19'13


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    1. Thanks a lot, dear Dana.

      What a beautiful avatar you have! I'm happy to see you again. :)

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  2. Ah Diamonds, the trouble you have to go through to get a good one is beyond me. Dig deep, and beneath all that rubbish lies something which is precious.

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    1. That's very true, Rumpunch. To get the diamonds, we have to put pressure. Literally, to get the best, we have to work hard and smart.

      I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for being here. :)

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  3. BEAUTIFUL POEM BALQIS,TRUE WORDS ,THE WORLD IS FULL OF UNSEEN TREASURES.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, Aunt Mary. What you said is true. So many things are unseen whether they are treasures or other things. :)

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  4. I feel that somethings are better off hidden from the eyes of humans. More than the good that it might bring to human kind, it is destruction of the nature that we commit.

    As for your poem, it's a delight to read. Just yesterday I was thinking that I haven't read your post recently, this came to my light. It made me happy.

    The thoughts as you portrayed in the poem are so encouraging. The fact that we still have something to look forward to even though it's seemingly invisible is comforting to the restless mind. :)

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    1. I agree with you, Sui. :)

      I was procrastinating from blogging for awhile! Not much ideas came to my mind. Apart from that, I had been very busy.

      Thank you so much for your nice comments. :)

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  5. and the stars and sun will be uncovered once you wait...
    and the pearls and diamonds will be found if you strive to look for it..

    what a nice poem :)

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    1. WoW! Aj, your words put me in deep thought. They're so beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing. And thanks, too, for reading this poem. :)

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  6. Cool reminder to start the year- :))

    Hi BB- :))

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    1. Hi Omo! :))

      Happy New Year to you! I wrote this at the time ideas refused to flow. Anyway, thanks for your comment.:)

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  7. Beautiful!
    Somewhere hidden are awesome creations!
    Nice poem!

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    1. Thank you so much, Ric. Indeed, you're right. There are always things unknown to us. :)

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  8. Hi, Balqis,A beautifully penned Haiku. All beautiful, unique things are hard to come by. They always require some super extra special effort on your part to get to them.

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    1. That's right, Sam. Thank you for your comments. :)

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  9. That is so beautiful, Balqis! Among people, there are stars, pearls and diamonds with great skills and talents. Their potentials are yet to be discovered or perhaps kept hidden for some reasons.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words, Zunnur. Sometimes something is raw in our eyes but there is something else beautiful behind it. I like your comments. :)

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  10. In the inner parts of human beings there are beautiful places not always evident to their species!

    It is a pleasure to discover them... I know!!!!

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    1. Wow! I agree on this. Your comments are always an eye-opener. I'm so glad to read them. Thank you so much for making my day! :))

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