I run as fast as a deer
but I stumble and fall into fear
I walk in a steady stride
end up wobbling without a might
I quicken my pace in a haste
to reach the light though I'm in daze
It's slowly going away from me
I struggle hard to be freed
And reach that light I need most
Don't leave me here in a frost
balqis
Nov23'12
I love the way your poem rhymes, Balqis. It's a beautiful poem. We go through lots of hurdles in order to achieve something we really need in life. Sometimes we succeed, sometimes we continue to struggle on and on.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your kind words so much. I try my best to write poems that make sense. Indeed, life is full of challenges. It depends on one's will and determination to overcome them.
DeleteThank you for reading this poem. :)
WOW, great post. I like it so much that I cant describe it. what a post. Rhymes are my favourites. keep it up, friend.
ReplyDeleteHi Sam! Your WOW means a lot and your words of encouragement, too. Thank you so much! :)
DeleteBeautiful Poem!! I love rhymes. Oh, and I can relate to it
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Thank you so much, Dana. I'm happy you could relate to it. :)
DeleteWe humans make promises not to leave each others but still these promises are so hollow and fake.Frost is made by their indifferency.I pray one day the sun will rise and will remove all this mist and fog.
ReplyDeleteI'm really amazed by your poetic lines, Zarnab. You hit it right! Thank you so much. :)
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